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    My "Life Story" -- Poem Version

    I am new to Poetry, so... Please bear with me.

    Parents met in Hawaii,
    And dated for 5 Months.
    After 22 years of marriage,
    My dad is 50 years of age.
    And as you can see,
    I'm still here and free.

    I was born in July,
    And do for a while will not die.

    I love to play Video Games,
    And I have no shame.

    I am true and honest,
    I'm not a Con Artist.

    I eat everything on my plate,
    And am deprived of hate.

    My life has been fun,
    I will live for years to come.



    I know some doesn't Rhyme, and I personally don't care at the moment. I'm just happy I made a Poem.

    What do y'all think?

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    Its Kind of strange cause some words dont rhyme
    Life is Life...


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    True bout the rhyme, but good tough

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    I think it's good, poetry is alien to me. I don't understand the appeal

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    uhmm....Ok?

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    Its the thought that counts. Not all words have to rhyme in many poems.....



    Why look at sigs anyways?


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    Quote Originally Posted by -Simple- View Post
    Its Kind of strange cause some words dont rhyme
    My friend, and all my other friends who belive poems have to rhyme all the time, this could be a


    Free verse, cinquain, maybe name poem,,narrative poem,haiku, and tanka

    although some of my statements are pretty stupid it is probably either a free verse or a narrative poem

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    I liked it, don't really care if it does rhyme or doesn't.
    My teacher even said poems don't always have to rhyme.
    Even I know that for a fact, even though I don't know shit about poetry.
    Honesty Counts
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    Might not be as active because of school =(


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    I read this and i was like Question Mark? This didn't really make that much sense and barely rythmed