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    Freestylin



    Watch me go,
    as you know you da hoe
    im da guy that u will blow
    fuck my money ur a no.
    dont wanna fuck dont wanna go
    people fightin, wanna bee's
    everybody going in and as i now go riding high
    i can see the people cry people die people lie
    what the fuck is that you see
    we are peoples enemies


    Fuck the war , fuck the crimes ,
    fuck the people and the dimes cant u see my world is stained
    i just need to rid dis pain
    and is i sit try and think
    my mind blinks tryna sink

    but i go i go and cruise feel my pain(pause)
    i got nutin to lose
    try ma best and to fuck wit the rest i just wanna get through this hard test
    wanna be , i wanna be, i wanna be oh cant u see
    the world is tuff but i gotta fite i gotta try and get it rite
    so u gotta roll
    so stick ur head up high
    just go and sing a lullabye as people try to
    say goodbye
    dont give in and
    dont give up cus
    peoples words smell worse then crap.

    and as i go and finish my tite rap i wanna give a nice clap to everyoneone that deserves shit but aint got shit. keep fitiing and try shit ul get shit.
    Last edited by roanildinho; 07-05-2011 at 10:57 PM.

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    I have one thing to say, and it's directed at the last line of your freestyle:

    Oh shit.
    Quote of the week: "Others define me, but ever may I choose a different word."



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    Lawl. u mad son

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    If your gonna curse do it lightly and in mopre places that need it as to every other word.

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    sucks off ass

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    U sayin "shit" a lot of times^^