honestly, it's very bad ._.
the stuff is just flowing out, way too much of it
the coloring isn't blended so well, the rendering of the render is bad, it looks like it's been oversharpened, and most of the stuff isn't added in so well .-.
the focal point is all over the place; first thing i see is girl, then blob, then blue brushing, then blue panties, then blob again ._.
i can't tell if you improved since i'm a one lazy ass....