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    Talking Under the Ocean Sim

    Hey guys, Ive just graduated from high school and plan to start a coureer in visual effects/ editing for companies. I'll start a little bit while Im still in college but here is some of what I've been working on.

    please give me some feedback on what you think
    BY THE WAY, i made this from scratch using adobe after effects cs4. took 12+ hours to make, i experimented alot
    Last edited by yoman35; 08-04-2011 at 12:23 PM. Reason: Forgot to specify how it was made

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    The text doesn't seem to be in the water, it just looks like it's put there.
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    And I've been doing photoshop work for a very long time, and I've never heard of BLANE.

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    more camera movement, maybe some more life (like add some fishes or whatevs)



    maybe some integrated text within the sea bed, having the camera pass by

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    Make the text be in the water not like above it be sure to make a precomp to change that shit maybe some fishies not too noticeable but just enough fishes and have a 3d camera go like around

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    Quote Originally Posted by Keroaplt View Post
    Make the text be in the water not like above it be sure to make a precomp to change that shit maybe some fishies not too noticeable but just enough fishes and have a 3d camera go like around
    forgot to make a precomp thanks though

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    looks interesting for a start. definitely needs more to it though


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    well iu think it looks great but the light changes too much ...
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    That looks really nice!
    What font is that btw?

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    pretty cool
    but the text needs to be incorporated in more


    Shifty sexy shit


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    looks great, how did you make those plants?
    and precomping is awsum, you should use it more often.
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    Generally, it was amazing. Just make the seaweed not symmetrical. try to make them different sizes and different shape.

    gj none the less.



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