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    Try adding a second eyebrow, below and above the eye. Will improve.
    And u need to fix the hair too
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    Nice drawing
    Only the eyes doesn't fit dont know why but looks weird.

    But nice!

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    Eyes on top of the hair look bad and also the nose isn't the best.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ske1th View Post
    Isn't bad, but i don't like eyes, very large
    thats why its called anime .-.

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    i already got an intous 4 on a whim.


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    The eyes over the hair is done in a lot of anime artworks I've seen on DA recently so it's fine. But yea, in proportion to the neck, the eyes are rather big. Just do some more sketching to get the right head proportion. Don't forget that the hair line is pretty high too, so the top right hair part could be raised more. :0 Otherwise, for just beginning, it looks fine. I'd recommend you try to sketch different poses and angles every now and then, it'll really help you to understand anatomy, the most important part of anime, lol

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