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    Cmon i wanna battle sum1

    Dont judge me on my name lol

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    Kick a verse...I'm game

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    Quote Originally Posted by Einstein2.0 View Post
    Kick a verse...I'm game

    LOl lemme try idk im kinda new tell me improvemeants pliz tx here i go

    I call out what i see
    when i look at you all i see is beuaty
    reppin all this shit i feel like a cat stuck in a tree
    dont know how to get down i count 1-2-3
    first im gone then im back
    michael jackson was better black
    my life is like a freethrow commin off my man shaq
    sucks dont it
    but bitch im only here for a moment <- idk i think this is sum eminem shit lol

    made this up in like 3 mins has no meaning watsoever. Its jus what im thinkin about

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    So here's my little 8 bar statement Call me mistaken.
    I see lyrics on here but the talent seems vacant
    don't claim to be the best, cause boy you're mistaken
    I take my time, coz this is a game of patience
    I leave you to produce whack shit in your basement
    thinking you're the shit yet you never get payment
    you ain't changed your clothes in days and your trainers are ancient
    Just get in a shower, I can't tolerate your fragrance

    ~Gilcrow

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    Quote Originally Posted by Gilcrow View Post
    So here's my little 8 bar statement Call me mistaken.
    I see lyrics on here but the talent seems vacant
    don't claim to be the best, cause boy you're mistaken
    I take my time, coz this is a game of patience
    I leave you to produce whack shit in your basement
    thinking you're the shit yet you never get payment
    you ain't changed your clothes in days and your trainers are ancient
    Just get in a shower, I can't tolerate your fragrance

    ~Gilcrow
    thats 4 bars 8 lines lmfao other then that its cool

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    Quote Originally Posted by Gilcrow View Post
    So here's my little 8 bar statement Call me mistaken.
    I see lyrics on here but the talent seems vacant
    don't claim to be the best, cause boy you're mistaken
    I take my time, coz this is a game of patience
    I leave you to produce whack shit in your basement
    thinking you're the shit yet you never get payment
    you ain't changed your clothes in days and your trainers are ancient
    Just get in a shower, I can't tolerate your fragrance

    ~Gilcrow
    Just jizzed in my pants.

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    Come at me brosef


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    jackpoop...
    jk xD

    Quote Originally Posted by Gilcrow View Post
    So here's my little 8 bar statement Call me mistaken.
    I see lyrics on here but the talent seems vacant
    don't claim to be the best, cause boy you're mistaken
    I take my time, coz this is a game of patience
    I leave you to produce whack shit in your basement
    thinking you're the shit yet you never get payment
    you ain't changed your clothes in days and your trainers are ancient
    Just get in a shower, I can't tolerate your fragrance

    ~Gilcrow
    HOLY SHIT. EPIC

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    Quote Originally Posted by Gilcrow View Post
    So here's my little 8 bar statement Call me mistaken.
    I see lyrics on here but the talent seems vacant
    don't claim to be the best, cause boy you're mistaken
    I take my time, coz this is a game of patience
    I leave you to produce whack shit in your basement
    thinking you're the shit yet you never get payment
    you ain't changed your clothes in days and your trainers are ancient
    Just get in a shower, I can't tolerate your fragrance

    ~Gilcrow
    It's quite funny that you say that you can't tolerate my fragrance,
    'Cuz last time that I checked you were the one that was ancient.
    It amazes me still that you're here tryin' to kick it,
    So I guess I'll have to take your script and flip it.
    So listen closely to the lyrics, that are spewing in this topic,
    But don't dare try to challenge, there's no way that you can top it.
    It's irrelevant, I'm rappin for the hell of it,
    There's no way that you can shake it
    So go ahead, and give me payment.
    For the teachings I disperse,
    This rap shit's not rehearsed.
    Didn't you know that jumping on me will get you clowned on,
    Your fake ass rhyming is now frowned on
    so leave now, disappear before I put you in a hearse.

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    Quote Originally Posted by dracconus View Post
    It's quite funny that you say that you can't tolerate my fragrance,
    'Cuz last time that I checked you were the one that was ancient.
    It amazes me still that you're here tryin' to kick it,
    So I guess I'll have to take your script and flip it.
    So listen closely to the lyrics, that are spewing in this topic,
    But don't dare try to challenge, there's no way that you can top it.
    It's irrelevant, I'm rappin for the hell of it,
    There's no way that you can shake it
    So go ahead, and give me payment.
    For the teachings I disperse,
    This rap shit's not rehearsed.
    Didn't you know that jumping on me will get you clowned on,
    Your fake ass rhyming is now frowned on
    so leave now, disappear before I put you in a hearse.
    Forget you, Im about to wack your face
    beat you, own you, make you displace
    sent you right outta here from NY to outer space

    bow down to your new duke, you got one more chance
    else ima be the better one and leave you with no stance
    sent you right outta here, Toronto to France

    Im gonna eliminate you, operation undergo
    My thoughts will make sure all your kids won't grow



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    I'll give you a try...Even though its not worth my time.
    Nigga stop bullshittin about states and countries.
    You have no flow of rap.
    do you even get the meaning of rap?
    we all know what countries and states are.
    we dont need another rebbeca black here, from "toronto to france"
    bitch take this wack sht to somewhere else.
    what comes next vancouver to germany.
    take a second to accept defeat.
    because im done here.
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    I tried lol, even though I suck at rapping.... hopefully that got you or something...
    No hard feelings.
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    @Hero (Cuz that Left'Nut guys rap is weaker than vanilla Ice's )
    Listen I'm glad that you're here giving me your input,
    Unfortunately for you it's just as useless as a dead foot.
    Your rappin's tight, that one I'll have to give you,
    But you're on the wrong website go watch more Gilligan on Hulu.
    You see you think you may have owned me,
    But the bottom line is this.
    The only thing that you own currently
    Is your clothes that smell like piss.
    So while we're bringing up your past,
    and the habits that have ended.
    Let me take this broken rap,
    And find a way to mend it.

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