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    Post Self reflection from outside in.

    She sits there amongst the leaves,
    The wind whispers no comfort to her ears,
    The trees are now bare,
    Nothing but cold in the air.
    Empty nights where I can't sleep,
    Wasted days, I cannot speak,
    Time seems to just past by,
    Sun and moon keep rising and falling across the sky.
    No hope, loneliness, empty soul,
    To whom do I whisper my darken sorrow,
    She sits there amongst the leaves,
    Trying to capture her happiness thieves.
    She is me, out of body, where my heart has been,
    reflection or looking from outside in.
    I sit there amongst the leaves,
    Forgive me Father for I have sinned.


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    Really good Liz! I actually enjoyed reading this

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    i shat bricks , good poem

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    Thank you, I haven't written in months, and this came to me a few hours ago.


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    More, do more. I don't really like poetry, but I like how yours rhymes nice

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    idk, i only write when it comes, not in demand, but there are like 3 pages, of my stuff here, maybe more.


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    Yeah I know, reading most of them now.

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    okidoke, hope you like them too.


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    Wow, I like it. It's nice.





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    Very good @Liz. Good job.

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    I liked it, very nice.
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    So I'm wondering is this poem about you or something to do with your life?
    If so, then have you really committed a sin and want your father to forgive it?

    But its really good.
    Just two questions I had and want answered.
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    Notice i capitalized 'Father' its a reference to God etc. They say the ultimate sin is not loving yourself, and depression (the theme of this poem) is raged turned inwards, and thus not loving myself for who I am, or even finding who I used to be. So I am asking 'God' for forgiveness, because I sin.


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    I wouldn't like to offend, but I never understood poetry. I read it a couple of times but I still don't understand. I'm mostly a straight A student and techers praise me for intelligence and bla bla, but My Croatian and English language always have fallen behind because of literature. I can write rhymes which actually was my hoby before, but not poetry like yours and others in this section. I can feel the emotions in the poets, but I still don't get the point. It's just me, probably.
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