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    My 2nd attempt at poetry "You and I"

    Can we stay up and watch the stars?
    Can we imagine a life better than ours?
    When I'm with you, butterflies race throughout me
    When I'm with you I don't care if people see me
    Baby, cause it doesn't matter if I'm insecure
    I don't want to be in anyone's arms but yours
    You are the one that is meant for me
    Baby, do you think we were meant to be?
    We could be doing anything, and I enjoy it
    I love you, but I'm afraid to say it
    Honey, do you accept me for who I am?
    I'm falling apart like the night before an exam
    Im sitting here thinking about the choices we've made
    Baby, let's just let it go, let's stop being afraid
    We are so perfect, we were made to be
    We go together like one two three...

    - Ryan

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    @Moto This is actually quite good well better then what i can do

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    Quote Originally Posted by cgallagher21 View Post
    @Moto This is actually quite good well better then what i can do
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    @Liz critique me?



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