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    Life

    No one know if reincarnation exists
    So I assist you Live up your life
    Because who know you just have one chance
    A chance that you got to give the world a glance
    So try to explore the world as much as you can
    Get car get money go to clubs and dance
    But at most try to make you name stand
    Every single moment of your life is in your hands
    what I mean is do something good for others and be known
    So after you die you still be loved by people and own

    I dont know if it make sense but i gave poetry a good try.

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    It's pretty good, I especially liked this part;
    Because who know you just have one chance
    A chance that you got to give the world a glance
    This is what I feel that starts to make your poem good.



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