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    Post He's mine.

    My knees tremble, my heart pounds,
    My lungs work at a faster pace, My arms bound.
    I look into his eyes, I see the man he truly is,
    No need to hide, no need to lie, just bliss.
    He draws nearer, My mouth dries up,
    He is mine, forever and I won't give him up.
    He holds me tight, his embrace as warm as a cozy fireplace,
    His eyes never leaving mine, and so our hearts give chase.
    Every sensation, is a magical fascination,
    Love at its purest state, his hand softly caresses my face,
    He is my savior, there's no bad memory he can't erase.
    I cannot imagine this world without him, it would be a half life
    He is simply the only cure to my every strife
    For he is my husband, and I his wife.



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    Amazing poetry Liz Hope to see more soon.

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    That's a pretty damn good poem.
    The meaning is really good. The way you connected the dots was fascinating.
    Last edited by Hero; 09-15-2011 at 06:41 PM.



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    @Alessandro10 try reading it in a different way.
    @Liz honestly make more I write poetry and stories whenever I'm bored or just feel like writing and pour my heart into my poetry and just write random Books :3 You're really good Liz :P Stick to it. I hope to see more soon.

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    there's a couple pages here of my stuff, feel free to browse through them.


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    I shall as long as you read mine when I posted them

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    Amazing :P I lob u <3

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    Your logic is invalid, cuz obviously i have friends.. Look at my avatar dumb ass...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jetfire. View Post
    Do you write for a hobby?
    only when I get inspired to do so...


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    Quote Originally Posted by Liz View Post
    only when I get inspired to do so...
    Ohh, It's really good.
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    Quote Originally Posted by iTzSeyeko. View Post
    Your logic is invalid, cuz obviously i have friends.. Look at my avatar dumb ass...

    awwh you mad?

    Yup no friends here....

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    Quote Originally Posted by Liz View Post
    only when I get inspired to do so...
    Who, or what inspires you?



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    Reading this was kinda weird to be honest. It's straying away from your style, which in a sense is actually a good thing I suppose. Not often do you write so bluntly, and especially not with AABB rhyming schemes. Also, it was hopeful... and warm. That's definitely a change of pace

    I'll end this reply simply with what I usually tell you: I STILL WANT MORE

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