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    I'm Back Mother Fuckers.

    Yeah, I'm back bitches. Prepare the god damn throne.
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    4 bar rhymes? No internal rhyme or any good literary devices? Off syllables are off? Really?

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    Quote Originally Posted by J Miliam View Post
    4 bar rhymes? No internal rhyme or any good literary devices? Off syllables are off? Really?
    Read the last line pls.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Nitehawk772 View Post


    Read the last line pls.
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    Because it's written down...

    It'd be good if it was a freestyle, But I could write that in my sleep if I had 20 mins.

    Rap artists freestyle a lot and get really good at it, Then, When they write their songs they're AMAZING and even better than when they freestyle. You get what I mean?

    What happened to you writing something good in 20 minutes?

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    Quote Originally Posted by J Miliam View Post


    What happened to you writing something good in 20 minutes?
    I freestyled that in 30 seconds...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Nitehawk772 View Post


    I freestyled that in 30 seconds...
    Why'd you put so little effort? I thought you actually wanted to do something good? Or are you not able to?

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    Quote Originally Posted by J Miliam View Post
    Why'd you put so little effort? I thought you actually wanted to do something good? Or are you not able to?
    I don't have 20 mins. to write something... I told you that...



    I'll spit a better freestyle tomorrow.


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