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    First Rap

    time flies when you're swimming in an open mind. why don't I open up and
    we'll see what we can find. just give me 5 minutes and i'll let my brilliance
    shine. I got into rap to show this world what I'm really about. Not drugs,
    sex,and getting blacked out. nah, having fun, living free, just chillin out.
    My biggest fear in life is growing up and being nameless, i swear to god
    one day I'll be famous. I slack off in school so no way i could be a genius.
    My only solution is to give up and become an artist. MY insperation may come
    diferently. I didn't grow up in the ghetto or live on the street.
    I'm a white middle class american. My biggest problem is solving a math equation.
    Hip-Hop is the language of my life. I put my headphones on and i put down
    the knife. One of the main things i struggle with is depression. that and
    my lack to need progression. but in the end i can see my succession. My
    favorite artists are macklemore and eminem, they gave me the insperation to
    pick up the pen. give me time, i'll be big enough to hang with them.
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    lyric is good the flow is bad! rework it and it got be good

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    Quote Originally Posted by -TeamDarkness- View Post
    lyric is good the flow is bad! rework it and it got be good
    Thanks man. The feedback is really appreciated. I'm only 14, so I've got time to work on the flow.
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    Not bad. And yea your flow needs some work.

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    Quote Originally Posted by raphaterz View Post
    Not bad. And yea your flow needs some work.
    Thanks man, it really means a lot
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