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    First Photoshop Picture :D

    First finished photoshopped logo thing for me, tell me what you all think
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    nicely done! It could be a little bigger so people can use it for web avatars!

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    I think it's nice, but there are a few things I could point out; only to help you.
    I work in the graphic design field for a living, so my eye has been trained to spot out small things, imperfections.
    Don't take any of what I say as an insult, I'm only trying to help you!

    - The bevel and emboss: either needs to be toned down in color (i.e the white a darker grey shade) or set the white on the bevel and emboss to overlay, and reduce the opacity a few percent.

    - The outer glow(Lettering): once again, with this outer glow it needs to be reduced in opacity, I'd reduce it to, say, around 65%. This makes the text look a lot clearer, and doesn't distract a person's sight to the outside. What you have going on, takes away from the lettering - and instinctively makes a person focus more on the background (which I'm sure you don't want!)

    - Ghillie suit people (lol): You did something smart by placing the outer glow on the characters, I'm assuming you did it because the cut out's edges looked rough, and pixelated? A trick to this is to take the softening brush, and run it around the edges a few times. This way you don't get that cheap/overdone look. But again, smart move - something most beginners wouldn't think of!

    - The smoke effect: I like this effect in this piece, I just think it stands out a little too much, and makes the whole picture a little... busy. Try to tone down the brightness of it, with either a reduction in brightness/addition in contrast, or even just select the layer and reduce its opacity!

    Keep up the good work, and you'll just keep getting better. (:

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    @Eccentric That is some bold CnC. I love your feedback man, very thorough.
    @imicron This is quite good for a first. However, if you want to focus on making forum signatures and etc., try working on a smaller dimension size. Mess around with brushes, text, filters, and etc. until you get used to it.

    Keep it up !

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    Really good , post other works if you got :P

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    Keep it up man! It's good

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    Thank you

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    good but too much dark in it

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    Kool and nice man but too much dark in it

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    For the first time (I guess) its looking nice. Keep it up

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