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    The World, And Nothing Less.

    And they asked me, "What does it mean to you?"

    I responded.

    It means the world to me, and even more, the world, and nothing less.
    Full of trouble, forbidden love, but it's love, nonetheless.
    We've survived it all, nothing is this rough time.
    She loves me, I love her, we're together, where's the crime?
    Our moments together, you'll never take them away.
    It'll be her and I, despite what they say.
    This can't be stopped, I won't give up, nor will she.
    We're happy together, we're as one, can't you see?
    These hard times you're starting, is it a fight you're inciting?
    This is warfare, a battle! A fight worth fighting.
    I'll fight strong, she'll be by my side.
    We're young, but to be together, isn't for you to decide.
    She's mine, it doesn't matter what you see in your eyes.
    All of these lies, and ties, and tries, I've kept sight of my prize.
    I'll stand for what I believe in, I don't mean to disrespect.
    But this is love, and love isn't a crime, last I checked.
    What is it you're trying to do here? What is your goal?
    Not only is this ridiculous, it's out of control.
    You're driving her away, and producing pure hate.
    It's to the point, that there will never be a clean slate.
    Is this your aim? Is this really what you want?
    It's not? But it's outrageously flaunt.
    A man can't cast opinions, without one of himself.
    Am I really the enemy? Take a look at yourself.
    And you have the nerve enough to ask? What this means to me?
    I can tell you what you want to hear, but you'll never hear my plea.
    It means the world to me, and even more, the world, and nothing less.
    Full of trouble, forbidden love, but it's love, nonetheless.
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    Very well structured, enjoyed the story it told, you write this yourself? If so excellent work man.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Lehsyrus View Post
    Very well structured, enjoyed the story it told, you write this yourself? If so excellent work man.
    I wrote it myself, about a situation I'm currently going through.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Toxin View Post


    I wrote it myself, about a situation I'm currently going through.
    It's got heart man, you should show this to her.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Lehsyrus View Post


    It's got heart man, you should show this to her.
    She was the first one to see it.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Toxin View Post


    She was the first one to see it.
    Smart man I used a poem to get my ex back awhile ago, girls love seeing our emotions through artistic means

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    Le sabotage. Why do people think they have the right to tell you how to live your life, or who you can love. Decently written, you get the jest of what you are trying to say, and what is currently happening. Nice job.


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