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    Love's First Taste

    Love’s First Taste

    How could’ve I known that I’d be made a fool
    By Cupid’s demand, I had lost mine life’s control
    He’d struck me with an arrow in order to love you
    If the world’s a stage, then your lover is my role

    She seemed so charming, like spring’s first flowers
    And just like roses, mine cheeks turned a lovely red
    For a kiss I longed- it would draw a smile for hours
    I had been starving, but by love and lips- I was fed

    I had ne’er had some experience, in love and such
    But o’ now I swear, I loved her- perhaps too much
    Love’s first taste- it dripped magic from my quill

    Yet ne’er was it felt, but just a mere hope in my dream
    I was just a man- ne’er against destiny will I win
    Love’s first taste- it was so sweet, but ‘twas never real
    God is great, beer is good, and people are crazy.

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    This is truly a work of art, i love it.

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    Really nice one, there is one thing that disturbs me on this section, in order to post, my post has to be approved before. I think poetry is about expressing your feelings and thoughts through beautiful words. Having someone approving my feelings and thoughts doesn't sound like I'm free to express myself.



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    Quote Originally Posted by Sir Nathan View Post
    Love’s First Taste

    How could’ve I known that I’d be made a fool
    By Cupid’s demand, I had lost mine life’s control
    He’d struck me with an arrow in order to love you
    If the world’s a stage, then your lover is my role

    She seemed so charming, like spring’s first flowers
    And just like roses, mine cheeks turned a lovely red
    For a kiss I longed- it would draw a smile for hours
    I had been starving, but by love and lips- I was fed

    I had ne’er had some experience, in love and such
    But o’ now I swear, I loved her- perhaps too much
    Love’s first taste- it dripped magic from my quill

    Yet ne’er was it felt, but just a mere hope in my dream
    I was just a man- ne’er against destiny will I win
    Love’s first taste- it was so sweet, but ‘twas never real
    you are a magician dude

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