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    I'll be the first one to embarrass himself.

    Play Toy

    For every life I take,
    There will be another one to make.
    A fresh new start on life,
    My fingers being to fidgeting about the knife.

    I love to slaughter,
    Causing all this pain, I love to hear to holler.
    I slowly break all ten of your fingers,
    The sound of your screams still linger.

    Cutting your wrist ever so slightly,
    Checking the ropes making sure they're tied tightly.
    All around your wrist I go,
    Pulling your skin back easy as so.

    Oh no! Don't pass out from pain,
    Because I will wait until you awake to start again.
    Now to make you gag on your own flesh,
    Feeding it to you, your about to throw up, so I'll save the rest.

    Do you really think I'm Insane?
    Enjoying every minute of your pain?
    Chains around your skinless wrist,
    You plead for me not to do this.

    Taking a red hot metal rod,
    Listen close this is not a fraud.
    I slide this red hot rod across your chest,
    This all makes a pretty bad mess.

    Its getting quite late,
    You'll die at this rate.
    I go to sleep to give you a break,
    How much more are you going to take.

    To wake you I give you a nice punch in the face,
    Your heart already begins to race.
    Cutting off your fingers with some rusted scissors,
    Some of your skin being tore.

    I tie your arms behind your back,
    I take a razor from a rack.
    I slowly begin to shave your head,
    While this is happening you hear what needs to be said.

    Tying rope around your legs,
    Using some pegs.
    I hang you upside down,
    I slowly spin you round.

    Giving you a few minutes for the blood to rush to your head,
    You'll finally know what it means to be dead.
    I take a knife and cut slits on your head and around.
    You bleed to dead quickly and screaming no one heard a sound.

    I sit and have a feast of your flesh and sucking the meat from your fingers,
    The sound of your screams still lingers.
    A cup of your blood, I enjoy,
    I go back up to the street to find my next little play toy.



    This poem was no proof read, or gone over for spell checks. Find something wrong, don't be afraid to correct me.

    Poem was written for....
    "Insert name here."


    Teehee, here comes the flames.

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    Figures you were the first to post a real poem.
    Nice form..?
    I can't critique it.
    Keep up the good work.


    [Only read like 4 lines.. ehh..]

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    Quote Originally Posted by Magisterium View Post
    Figures you were the first to post a real poem.
    Nice form..?
    I can't critique it.
    Keep up the good work.

    [Only read like 4 lines.. ehh..]
    You should finish reading it.

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    Too lazy to read, I think I'm gonna watch that exclusive vid on tv about Michael's dead with Uri Geller..
    Je pense donc je suis.






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    Quote Originally Posted by Kiddkarma View Post
    You should finish reading it.
    readings for fags just like poetry

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    Quote Originally Posted by fabzz View Post
    readings for fags just like poetry
    Thanks. <3 You Fabz

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    Very morbid, but very real, well rhymed, i like it. kinda worries me though lol


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    Quote Originally Posted by Liz View Post
    Very morbid, but very real, well rhymed, i like it. kinda worries me though lol
    Its okay Liz!!!
    I'll write another one....thats not soooo, disturbing just for you. ^^

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    I read up to cutting wrists and decided to cut myself.





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    Quote Originally Posted by Dave84311 View Post
    I read up to cutting wrists and decided to cut myself.
    Im sorry I caused your overly depression.

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    Giving you a few minutes for the blood to rush to your head,
    You'll finally know what it means to be dead.
    I take a knife and cut slits on your head and around.
    You bleed to dead quickly and screaming no one heard a sound.
    Well damn Dave, good thing you didn't read to here...

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    this is a poem that worries me....lol...nj kidd

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    Have you gone off your Anti-Depressent pills again... Now come on you know your physciatrist would not approve of this.



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    Quote Originally Posted by Dave84311 View Post
    I read up to cutting wrists and decided to cut myself.
    Dave, you already did you leg..

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