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    Thumbs up My short rap!

    Decided to make a short rap...

    You guys suck at rapping your lines sound like me crapping,
    Right here I'ma teach you how to,
    You should be proud too! be in my presence,
    My essence is pure rap there's no crap about it don't talk smack about it,
    Or I'll destroy you,
    you're just mad that your ugly and no one wants to employ you,
    That's it I'm done your mum's ashamed to call you her son.
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    That wasn't that good for someone who says my rap sucks.
    I'm not proud to be in your presence,
    I don't give one nor two nor three fucks!
    You think you're smart? Dude you smell like ignorance!

    I think someone should teach you how to make
    Some good rhymes for your rap!
    You're no rapper, you're just a fake!
    Better just shut up cuz that was a big crap!



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    You guys need to learn to count bars before you attempt to post any type of rap.

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    Quote Originally Posted by unknownartist0 View Post
    You guys need to learn to count bars before you attempt to post any type of rap.
    What's counting bars? lol



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    Quote Originally Posted by unknownartist0 View Post
    You guys need to learn to count bars before you attempt to post any type of rap.
    They don't really have a beat to count bars though. They're just trying to rhyme.

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    What's counting bars? lol
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    Quote Originally Posted by Vice-Versa View Post


    They don't really have a beat to count bars though. They're just trying to rhyme.



    How to Count Bars When Rapping | eHow
    Yeah maybe he has some kind of "preset" beat that he listens when reading the rhymes with no beat and it didn't sound good to him



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    Another bunch of faggot whack rappers, thinking that their good
    you wanna be's are quite obviously from a white neighborhood
    You probably should, stop living such a wanna being act
    Cause the only gats you know,Are those ancient Korean hats
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    That start was sick...
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    White neighborhood?
    Could. You please stop talking,
    Your face looks like it's gonna be stalking.
    It looks seedish, hell your so white, you could be swedish
    I'm living an act? you're whack,
    the only acting I'm doing is pretending
    to be aroused when I see your mom's rack.
    Your rhymes are so shit my sack can come up with better lines.
    I aint got time for your whines pls gtfo. before I make you get out.

    Quote Originally Posted by kublkun View Post
    Another bunch of faggot whack rappers, thinking that their good
    you wanna be's are quite obviously from a white neighborhood
    You probably should, stop living such a wanna being act
    Cause the only gats you know,Are those ancient Korean hats
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    Alright
    This is where I take off the gloves and start going for the throat
    You probably think your hood cause that "good" shit you smoke
    But man you're wasting your time, this game is bout felonous crimes
    I'm facing 5-7 years at the whim of my peers, While you thinking slanging dime bags is a grind

    I know you have to pretend to be aroused at the thought of tits
    Cause you're main priority is sucking the biggest, fatest, dick
    And I know you think you're slick, trying to perpetuate that you're straight
    But I saw right through that veil the second you started judging my face

    So take you're own advice, and just get the fuck off
    Cause its clearly evident, that you already lost
    and I don't mean to hurt your feelings, cause I know that you're soft
    But sometimes you gotta slap down a bitch to show that you are the Boss

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    That start was sick...
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    White neighborhood?
    Could. You please stop talking,
    Your face looks like it's gonna be stalking.
    It looks seedish, hell your so white, you could be swedish
    I'm living an act? you're whack,
    the only acting I'm doing is pretending
    to be aroused when I see your mom's rack.
    Your rhymes are so shit my sack can come up with better lines.
    I aint got time for your whines pls gtfo. before I make you get out.



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    Quote Originally Posted by Vice-Versa View Post
    They don't really have a beat to count bars though. They're just trying to rhyme.
    Quote Originally Posted by FatAssHacker123 View Post
    Yeah maybe he has some kind of "preset" beat that he listens when reading the rhymes with no beat and it didn't sound good to him
    You guys must not rap a lot, or really know the mechanics behind rapping if you make statements like these. You don't need a beat to count bars, it's just easier, and allows for better flow, but when you actually get skill at rapping, You don't need a beat to make amazing bars.
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    Quote Originally Posted by kublkun View Post
    Alright
    This is where I take off the gloves and start going for the throat
    You probably think your hood cause that "good" shit you smoke
    But man you're wasting your time, this game is bout felonous crimes
    I'm facing 5-7 years at the whim of my peers, While you thinking slanging dime bags is a grind

    I know you have to pretend to be aroused at the thought of tits
    Cause you're main priority is sucking the biggest, fatest, dick
    And I know you think you're slick, trying to perpetuate that you're straight
    But I saw right through that veil the second you started judging my face

    So take you're own advice, and just get the fuck off
    Cause its clearly evident, that you already lost
    and I don't mean to hurt your feelings, cause I know that you're soft
    But sometimes you gotta slap down a bitch to show that you are the Boss



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    You guys must not rap a lot, or really know the mechanics behind rapping if you make statements like these. You don't need a beat to count bars, it's just easier, and allows for better flow, but when you actually get skill at rapping, You don't need a beat to make amazing bars.
    Well, I don't rhyme a lot and when I do, I do it in Portuguese, so, it's obviously harder for me to rap in english. I try to do something good though.



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    Quote Originally Posted by FatAssHacker123 View Post


    Well, I don't rhyme a lot and when I do, I do it in Portuguese, so, it's obviously harder for me to rap in english. I try to do something good though.



    Ohhh, that makes sense lol.
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    I suck at rapping,
    Like how Lil wayne does it.

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