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    Small song-my first try

    I live in a hood
    everybuddy here called a 'dude'
    when we steal from the bank
    everyone says it was 'the black'

    ding,dang
    everyone says i am a gang
    ding,dang
    everyone says i am a gang

    After my gang work
    i moved to new york
    There were many mad
    and they all were dead
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    thats all for now,it's my first time writing rap song.

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    ummm idk what to say about that?

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    DISCRIMINATION!!!
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    its.....ugh....good start!!!

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    I sorry if i said "black" i won't flame or something
    and sorry Obama if i said something that disrespect you or the black sorry
    [i leave with many black and they call each other : Black , nig... sorry]

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    a little start

    ill puch you in the face
    your a fucking disgrace
    you dis me one moe time
    imma put you in your place
    under the ground
    where your not found
    but no one cares a bit
    cause you a 1...inch...dick

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    Quote Originally Posted by miksdubom View Post
    ill puch you in the face
    your a fucking disgrace
    you dis me one moe time
    imma put you in your place
    under the ground
    where your not found
    but no one cares a bit
    cause you a 1...inch...dick
    it's on me????

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    no i was giving you something to work with

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    starting isnt always easy, dont worry bout it, a couple of battles in, some quick frees and you'll catch on quick..
    bye

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    Ok thanks all,
    But i know many kids smaller in age then me that can rap like 2pac or jayz and so fast.

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