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    I Love You.

    Yes, I wrote this myself. How is it?

    I love you
    ~ ~
    Living or dying my love for you is outliving,
    My actions in the past may have been unforgiving, but
    Our love for each other made them forgiving.

    The tales I told were misleading,
    In which caused you to deceive me.

    Now you have started to believe in me,
    We have a sudden relieve,
    Back together, and
    I promise you I'll never,
    Break or sever,
    Our love,
    Let's start our forever,
    I love you.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Invis. View Post

    Now you have started to believe in me,
    We have a sudden relieve,
    Back together, and
    I promise you I'll never,
    Break or sever,
    Our love,
    Let's start our forever,
    I love you.
    I liked this part the most
    The world is a filthy place, it's a filthy goddamn horror show.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Niet View Post


    I liked this part the most
    Thank you for the feedback!

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    Good job man.

     
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    Quote Originally Posted by Øctaze View Post
    Good job man.
    Thank you for the feedback as well!

    Should I write more?

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