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    [Motorbike] Semi Sport Bike with new rim and brake setup

    An updated version of my bike.
    Messed up the acelerator and clutch on the handles.
    The fairings were super hard to makethis is my best attempt so far.
    General platform of the bike is the same.

    Features:

    New brake setup, inspired on Kawasaki Ninja ZX-6R
    Custom Rims
    New Suspension


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    Could use a lot more detail and more curves, but it's a start. Also try adding some better materials to the parts. lastly, your topology on the big grey thing on the side is messed up. You could jsut add edge loops going down the middle so you wouldnt have to make the holes by connecting to the sides.
    Seems like a decent start, carry on with this.

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    Quote Originally Posted by liettuva View Post
    Could use a lot more detail and more curves, but it's a start. Also try adding some better materials to the parts. lastly, your topology on the big grey thing on the side is messed up. You could jsut add edge loops going down the middle so you wouldnt have to make the holes by connecting to the sides.
    Seems like a decent start, carry on with this.
    Thanks for the CnC but specify what grey part are you talking about. If you are talking about the fairings, well, damn, I'm really trying to do something but its easier to make a chopper or a naked bike from scratch than dooing a sports bike fairing. About the materials Im trying to balance the color and the effects like reflection, but its evolving, slowly. Will try again when I can.
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    I really like your design, only thing I am not too fond of is the seat and that thing at the side is a bit unappealing. (to me)

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    Here, I drew over your vireframe render to show a bit of your problems.


    In RED - Add those two edgeloops I drew. Now you will be able to delete those nasty triangles and make it all quads.
    In BLUE - Add two edgeloops in the seat and push it down. It will make the topology a bit more even and will give the seat a nice curve.
    In GREEN - Try adding more edgeloops in it and giving it shape. It looks too distracting now.
    In PURPLE - That isn't very important, but you could add in an edgeloops and maybe give it some smoother shape.

    That the most important for now. After this you can add more details and tweak the model.

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    Quote Originally Posted by liettuva View Post
    Here, I drew over your vireframe render to show a bit of your problems.


    In RED - Add those two edgeloops I drew. Now you will be able to delete those nasty triangles and make it all quads.
    In BLUE - Add two edgeloops in the seat and push it down. It will make the topology a bit more even and will give the seat a nice curve.
    In GREEN - Try adding more edgeloops in it and giving it shape. It looks too distracting now.
    In PURPLE - That isn't very important, but you could add in an edgeloops and maybe give it some smoother shape.

    That the most important for now. After this you can add more details and tweak the model.
    Indeed. I agree the seat needs some improvement, will take my time to change it. The fairings (where the red line is) is really hard to model, I never achieved greats results with that but I am still trying to improve. The rear handle bar IMO needs a chain to make the real job, because this way it cant change gear xD (therefore useless bike) and I will try to mod this too.

    Thanks for your time.
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