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    Here's a poem I wrote a while back

    Here's a few things put together in a poetic style. all of the events are true
    lost some friends in a drunk car accident. wanted to write something about it for the first time.


    This story starts with a handful of few,
    growing up with each other not knowing what to do.
    Hanging out smokin' weed with no repercussions,
    thinking we were invincible and that nothing can touch us.
    So we started to get a little out of control,
    not thinking just drinking, robbing the local liquor store.
    We would drive up to the mountains drunk as hell,
    swerving and reckless but we didn't care.
    Little by little our futures were getting bleak,
    drugs and alcohol was the only thing we'd think and speak.
    We were burning the candle from both ends,
    who'd think it'd lead up to a fucking dead end.
    The day the tires stopped touching the ground,
    we learned about ourselves and everyone else around.
    They both wanted to grow up and become a star,
    but our selfishness just ended it in a car.
    Our lives were never the same that day,
    all we could do is just sit and pray.
    With the tears fallin' down our face,
    unable to stay in place,
    uncontrollable emotions; our minds were a mental case.
    All we had was our tears and fears,
    ending it in both of their senior years.
    We were the only ones to blame,
    thinking that our lives were just a game.
    A cold winter night that was so fucking beautiful,
    lead up to a crash and ended with a funeral.

    just alittle something. hope you like it

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    This is actually pretty good.
    It has a lot of meaning as well, which always makes the best poetry.
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    When the earth is changed into a humid dungeon,
    In which Hope like a bat
    Goes beating the walls with her timid wings
    And knocking her head against the rotten ceiling;
    When the rain stretching out its endless train
    Imitates the bars of a vast prison
    And a silent horde of loathsome spiders
    Comes to spin their webs in the depths of our brains,
    All at once the bells leap with rage
    And hurl a frightful roar at heaven,
    Even as wandering spirits with no country
    Burst into a stubborn, whimpering cry.
    — And without drums or music, long hearses
    Pass by slowly in my soul; Hope, vanquished,
    Weeps, and atrocious, despotic Anguish
    On my bowed skull plants her black flag.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Aborted View Post
    This is actually pretty good.
    It has a lot of meaning as well, which always makes the best poetry.
    /Bump
    dude you fucker, want me to do something with your sig. I can cut out the background and match the white while having crazy aborted text and an MPGH.

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    This is actually pretty good. .

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    Good work.


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    thanks guys. tried to write something meaningful and true. could be rap lyrics or something, but I'm too white

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    Quote Originally Posted by Oneirish View Post
    could be rap lyrics or something, but I'm too white
    I love it, it's simple but still has deep meaning.
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