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    My creations

    Yeah so his is my soundcloud, take a listen of any of them and tell me what you think
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    Bookmarked! Fuck yeah these are awesome.

    Critique:

    Satan's breakfast - gets too repetitive at the end
    Bikie Bob - also repetitive, wrong choice of sound effects, it just doesn't mix together,
    Sitting on the balcony - wrong choice of name, the sounds sitting on a balcony is boring whereas the beats suggest some fun, adventurous rhythm, maybe you should've been more bold with this one and made some parts even more explosive and intense
    A Boys Piano - messy rhythm and weird mixture of themes and beats, it just feels like the sound is all over the place

    I don't have time to listen to all of them now, but I'll surely be listening to them another time.

    Basically you shouldn't be afraid to move on and progress from a certain beat because in a lot of your songs just one rhythm takes up 1/4 of the whole song and when you change to the next rhythm it's usually similar to the previous one

    That's just my opinion though, I'm not a professional music critic.

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