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    New Style

    Please CnC i wanna master this C4D kinda style.
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    Sorry for the late reply bro bro.

    I like it a lot, but if you want to use a decent size so you have space to work with yet nice without toooo much space. You should use the size I use. 400x250

    Now onto actual C&C. I notice that you have the C4D in front of your image. You need to use a soft eraser, a clipping brush, or make a copy and lower the opacity to make it blend into her.

    Now I also notice that your background is really plain Jane. You should try make placing your C4D again, rotating it behind her with the flow of the ones in the front and go from there. If you blur the background layer of C4D it would also draw to your focal point.

    Overall, I like the color, I like the flow. No to Blending, no to background, no to depth.

    Pleaseeeee fix these things and post your new piece with this advice. I would love to see it.

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    That seriously looks horrible.

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    Quote Originally Posted by .REZ View Post
    That seriously looks horrible.
    Reported for low quality member.

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    Quote Originally Posted by pathogen_ View Post
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    I just ignore his comments, Hes nothing but a d bag..

    Thanks for the CnC


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    Quote Originally Posted by iTzSeyeko View Post


    I just ignore his comments, Hes nothing but a d bag..

    Thanks for the CnC

    He's just telling the truth.

    C4D's take away from the focal point as they're all bigger then the render itself, and a lot more prevalent and appealing then the focal.

    And you literally went to open like 3 - 4 C4D's, and just pasted them on top of the render.

    If you see how others incorporate C4D's it's to use them as a background, or to show depth, or to just fill up dead space some times.

    I don't see you doing any of the above with the C4D's, but trying to make them into an effect like you did with your most recent tag.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Defloration. View Post



    He's just telling the truth.

    C4D's take away from the focal point as they're all bigger then the render itself, and a lot more prevalent and appealing then the focal.

    And you literally went to open like 3 - 4 C4D's, and just pasted them on top of the render.

    If you see how others incorporate C4D's it's to use them as a background, or to show depth, or to just fill up dead space some times.

    I don't see you doing any of the above with the C4D's, but trying to make them into an effect like you did with your most recent tag.
    No i didn't


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    Quote Originally Posted by pathogen_ View Post
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    Reported? Lol, I'm giving my opinion on his creation, which is what he wanted. If you want further detail then you can have it.

    You need to practice more with this style, the fractals don't work and the blurring is unnecessary. It doesn't look good and you need to keep at it. I think its horrible. There.

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    Way better than your other style. Plenty of room for improvement in this style and a lot of different places you can go. Instead of cramming the piece with shit you can learn some different shit. Basically the main thing you want to do with this style is make sure that every C4D you use compliments the focal or the background in some way. Make sure it flows, if part of it sucks don't be afraid to mask it out and whack in part of a different C4D. Also try to experiment with manipulating C4D's and combining them with different kinds of effects. Kinda like bxd's style, not sure if you've heard of him. Just play with lighting and shit like that as well.

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