Pretty good, but I think that blurring the clipping mask would help a bit. Having them sharpened kinda makes a jarring effect and makes my eyes want to look at the clips instead of the rest of the piece.
I'm just going to remake this whole signature later. I had a really good idea for it, but it kind of fell apart as I was making the signature because the filter wasn't working right and brush wasn't scattering how I liked. Thanks for your input as always guys!