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    Sci-Fie Abstract




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    What was the render you started with?

    It's so dark.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Euphemistic View Post
    What was the render you started with?

    It's so dark.
    Its not suppose to be about the render, if that makes sense, its Abstract.. but the render i started with was


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    I know it's abstract, but the lighting leaves a lot to be desired.
    Bring the background brightness up a tad, and adjust the focal lights accordingly.
    When the earth is changed into a humid dungeon,
    In which Hope like a bat
    Goes beating the walls with her timid wings
    And knocking her head against the rotten ceiling;
    When the rain stretching out its endless train
    Imitates the bars of a vast prison
    And a silent horde of loathsome spiders
    Comes to spin their webs in the depths of our brains,
    All at once the bells leap with rage
    And hurl a frightful roar at heaven,
    Even as wandering spirits with no country
    Burst into a stubborn, whimpering cry.
    — And without drums or music, long hearses
    Pass by slowly in my soul; Hope, vanquished,
    Weeps, and atrocious, despotic Anguish
    On my bowed skull plants her black flag.

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    This piece has potential.

    Like others said, the pure darkness ruins it for me.

    If you just filled some of the space, or brightened it up, it would look great.

    I love the design you were going for though.

    Keep at this style, I like it.

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    Damn, i just can't seem to get it right


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    No man, it's really great, just brighten it up a bit
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