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    The edges of the brighter lit points seem a bit jagged, especially on the tank, so I'd suggest smoothing those with a little more blur.

    Overall though, looks rather good.
    When the earth is changed into a humid dungeon,
    In which Hope like a bat
    Goes beating the walls with her timid wings
    And knocking her head against the rotten ceiling;
    When the rain stretching out its endless train
    Imitates the bars of a vast prison
    And a silent horde of loathsome spiders
    Comes to spin their webs in the depths of our brains,
    All at once the bells leap with rage
    And hurl a frightful roar at heaven,
    Even as wandering spirits with no country
    Burst into a stubborn, whimpering cry.
    — And without drums or music, long hearses
    Pass by slowly in my soul; Hope, vanquished,
    Weeps, and atrocious, despotic Anguish
    On my bowed skull plants her black flag.

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    Quote Originally Posted by iTzSeyeko View Post
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    When it comes to beginner pieces like this, especially when they're Topazified (consolidated and distorted), it's hard to know what the creator actually did. Posting your original render/stock will help break the piece into basic elements that we can pick out.
    For me, this is one of the biggest reasons why I never critique beginner stuff; I can't tell what's been done.
    Last edited by Ryan; 10-15-2013 at 09:14 AM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ryan View Post


    When it comes to beginner pieces like this, especially when they're Topazified (consolidated and distorted), it's hard to know what the creator actually did. Posting your original render/stock will help break the piece into basic elements that we can pick out.
    For me, this is one of the biggest reasons why I never critique beginner stuff; I can't tell what's been done.
    Beginner stuff, you are kidding right? or are you just trying to be an asshole


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    Quote Originally Posted by iTzSeyeko View Post


    Beginner stuff, you are kidding right? or are you just trying to be an asshole
    Neither...I'm only being honest. In the standard classing system, this would be considered novice level. There's not anything wrong with that.
    It's beside the point though, which is that your composition method doesn't foster easy or detailed critique. It's too simplistic. I suggested posting your originals so that while this is your skill level, it can be looked past and the people who know how to critique well can do so.
    I'm trying to help you here.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ryan View Post


    Neither...I'm only being honest. In the standard classing system, this would be considered novice level. There's not anything wrong with that.
    It's beside the point though, which is that your composition method doesn't foster easy or detailed critique. It's too simplistic. I suggested posting your originals so that while this is your skill level, it can be looked past and the people who know how to critique well can do so.
    I'm trying to help you here.
    Some tags look better with a simplistic look, and thats what i was going for.. instead of cluttering with massive effects, i just used the focal for pretty much everything, the effects.background ligthing


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    Quote Originally Posted by iTzSeyeko View Post


    Some tags look better with a simplistic look, and thats what i was going for.. instead of cluttering with massive effects, i just used the focal for pretty much everything, the effects.background ligthing
    In that case, there's not a lot of critique that can be given. If you like it, great.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ryan View Post


    In that case, there's not a lot of critique that can be given. If you like it, great.
    Not trying to sound like a jerk or anything, I am just really stressed out atm, if you feel like i lashed out at you, i am really sorry.
    and didn't mean to come off that way

    appreciate your help alot.


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    Quote Originally Posted by iTzSeyeko View Post


    Not trying to sound like a jerk or anything, I am just really stressed out atm, if you feel like i lashed out at you, i am really sorry.
    and didn't mean to come off that way

    appreciate your help alot.

    You really should start getting your work classed.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Defloration. View Post

    You really should start getting your work classed.

    @iTzSeyekoIf you choose to do this, prepare for the brutal honesty. They don't mess around.
    They class you based on legitimate art techniques and principles, not whether people like it or not.
    Last edited by Ryan; 10-15-2013 at 03:25 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ryan View Post


    @iTzSeyekoIf you choose to do this, prepare for the brutal honesty. They don't mess around.
    They class you based on legitimate art techniques and principles, not whether people like it or not.
    Isnt art just peoples opinions? how can someone class someone when they might have a different opinion then the rest of the world?


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    Quote Originally Posted by iTzSeyeko View Post


    Isnt art just peoples opinions? how can someone class someone when they might have a different opinion then the rest of the world?
    When there's a spectrum between novice level work and professional work that will make you money in the industry, there are standards one can judge by. Like I said: legitimate art techniques and principles.
    If you do this for fun, don't get classed. If you have a passion for art and want to improve by the industry standard, get classed.

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