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    Shitty 2nd Try rendering

    I don't exactly know what I did, but I kinda like it. It's my own style.




    @Aborted , it might not be your style, but I'm still a beginner.
    @Defloration. , what'cha think?
    @iTzSeyeko Idk.
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    STOP PUTTING IT IN SPOILERRSSSSSSS

    i can't open it D:


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    Quote Originally Posted by iTzSeyeko View Post
    STOP PUTTING IT IN SPOILERRSSSSSSS

    i can't open it D:
    Check again .

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    Okay.. the text needs to go and the focal needs scaled down, almost takes up your signature


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    Focal takes up way too much space, and is just a head.

    What we refer to as, FHS.

    There's too much mixture of color on the focal, doesn't really go good.

    Aswell as seeing that there is just blatant strokes of color with no blending.

    Drop the text until you get good at it. Then you can start putting text on your published tags.

    And just work on things you can do with the original render, then start working on backgrounds.

    5/10.

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    Good Job Euphemistic

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    It looks good, but as others have already stated.
    The focus is a bit peculiar.

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