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    Bright Orange

    Decided to try out a tag after not using Photoshop in nearly a year. I'm open to any constructive criticism you may have. Thanks for your consideration.


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    The art style between the "whatever those bumpy things are" and the render are too different and don't come together too nicely, almost get's to a point where the 2D becomes more clear. It looks like you framed a anime girl.png image in lumps and blurred a sci-fi concept art piece for the background... could definitely use some more time in Photoshop. I hope you continue working with the program though, i would like too see some future material from you.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Naxu3 View Post
    The art style between the "whatever those bumpy things are" and the render are too different and don't come together too nicely, almost get's to a point where the 2D becomes more clear. It looks like you framed a anime girl.png image in lumps and blurred a sci-fi concept art piece for the background... could definitely use some more time in Photoshop. I hope you continue working with the program though, i would like too see some future material from you.

    Overall 7/10.
    Thanks. I'll keep that into consideration as I just felt like playing around in Photoshop so I guess I'll spend some more time into it.

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    Render is a little too sharp, and the C4D's up front are too obvious, blatant, and take away from a lot of the other aspects.

    Try using the C4D's more for the background then in the front too make it look complex, but not take away from other elements.

    The background looks simple, but I like it.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Defloration. View Post
    Render is a little too sharp, and the C4D's up front are too obvious, blatant, and take away from a lot of the other aspects.

    Try using the C4D's more for the background then in the front too make it look complex, but not take away from other elements.

    The background looks simple, but I like it.
    Thanks bby. Will take those into consideration when doing something like this again.

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    The render is a bit sharp, but I think the rest looks Ok, good job
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    I like the signature overall, but the C4D is much easier to focus than the render. It is because it has the same opacity and doent blend as good as it should and t also covers the render too much. Try blurring it cutting it a bit and blending as color burn or something, try to see whats the best / 8/10
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