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    Vertical signature attempt.

    I made a vertical signature 3 weeks ago, I actually forgot to post it here to see your CnC.



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    Looks awesome.
    If i could change anything,i'd make the body a little more visible.
    Other than that: 10/10.

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    Hard to see the character and the bright lights in the top right are extremely distracting, maybe die it down like you did to the blue in the bottom right... i still can not see the render's arm at all in this image...

    Overall: 9/10. Outstanding.

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    Looks great I agree that the colors could use some working on. If you can adding a sense of texture to the body would be great too. Other than that there ins't much to fix but I feel that the sig might be too big lol...

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    The bottom of the sig is like you really cutted his legs. That part should be solved if you know what I mean.
    Also MAYBE popping out the render a bit might be an option, but as it is, it integrats prefectly with the background.
    Overall 9.5/10 (fix legs and 10/10)
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    I can see where his legs cut off.

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    The contrast is waaaayyyyy too strong, and the shadows are waaaay too flat. Pretty much lost all of the detail in the shadows and midtones.

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