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    [Tag] Focusing On Feedback

    So in this signature, I was really trying to work on my depth and lighting.

    I really do think I did well on it, and plan on focusing on these things in every signature for now on.

    I kept the colors, while keeping the flow. I focused on how the end composition looks.

    Most of all I don't use Topaz. Hahaha.



    Hope you guys enjoy as I do.

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    there is too much going on

    Needs a simpler background

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    I'm not sure what you mean by the flow, or the composition. But there is definitely depth. Do you know how to use layer masking? Just curious, as layer masking is so good for fine tuning depth and adjustment layers. Hell it's even better than the eraser tool.

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    There is way to much happening in the background, i would start with fine-tuning that with more less-saturated colors. I found it really hard to figure out what to look at... no real flow is happening in your image.

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    Yea the bg isn't working for this

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    The "lots of things going on" its actually cool, its a chaotic sig
    But, that "cut" to the left and to the right of the render hurts my eyes. honestly,becauseof that it gets a 6/10 from me.
    Colors used are too many, and the blur isnt exactly in its best.
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    Alright for some real CNC and enough of this kiddie bs..

    Never try to force depth into a tag. not every single signature needs depth.. especially when you have to force it. and also.. remember the rule of thirds i know its hard sometimes and you think the piece looks better with a focal right in the middle but it ruins the comp and depth for that matter.

    Try not to over blur your background to force depth, let it come naturally

    im not liking the triangles with a clippy mask in them. it just throws the tag way out of ballance and doesn't feel like it belongs
    also the focal is not blended in at all.. and there is no defined light source

    keep working at it. i can see you are trying new things. but take your time.

    also a side note, no one cares if you use Topaz or not, its a great tool, just learn how to use it. not abuse it.


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    Quote Originally Posted by iTzSeyeko View Post


    also a side note, no one cares if you use Topaz or not, its a great tool, just learn how to use it. not abuse it.
    Take your own advice.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ethereal View Post


    Take your own advice.
    Shut the fuck up Jimmy.. i don't get you, like always cool one sec then total dick the next day.. just leave me the fuck alone. Juz cuz you get all bitchy cuz i made a shop which you don't like, i dont give a fuck what you like and don't like..


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    Quote Originally Posted by iTzSeyeko View Post


    Omg, you didn't say what I want you to say to him. You told me negative advice and now I'm butthurt and raging at you jimmy because you gave me negative feedback. Better rage at you and make you not like me more over advice.
    Fixed this post. Not flamebaiting. Just explaining Seyeko's argument.

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    Quote Originally Posted by iTzSeyeko View Post


    Shut the fuck up Jimmy.. i don't get you, like always cool one sec then total dick the next day.. just leave me the fuck alone. Juz cuz you get all bitchy cuz i made a shop which you don't like, i dont give a fuck what you like and don't like..
    Use more curse words, you might get some more friend requests on Facebook!


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    Quote Originally Posted by iTzSeyeko View Post


    Shut the fuck up Jimmy.. i don't get you, like always cool one sec then total dick the next day.. just leave me the fuck alone. Juz cuz you get all bitchy cuz i made a shop which you don't like, i dont give a fuck what you like and don't like..
    Yeah I'm a total dick because I told you that it's a scumbag move to sell signatures using other peoples resources.
    Private use and non profit is one thing, you selling signatures for 3 dollars using shit you didn't make is ripping.
    That site you sent me to is garbage btw. I see they removed all of my posts even though I was in the right.

    Here guys take a look at this faggots "graphics shop" where he makes money using other peoples work.


    My Graphic Shop Design - Signatures - One Canvas

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    Don't worry. They deleted my posts of screenshots of his rage about him over using Topaz in every signature he makes thinking it is good. You giving him advice to take his own advice then his rage.

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