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    From the skies.

    This is actually my first piece of poetry ever written (and that was kinda hard as i'm not english),however i wished to share this little one with you people.
    It has actually many hidden meanings,who will find the most?

    From the skies upon the ground
    What kind of place could this be
    This looks like a place made just for me
    Yet it doesn't feel like the perfect sound.

    Can't see my back anymore
    Like if i'm not having all the fun
    Just starting at this lonely sun
    Slowly losing my view,i need more.

    Suddently a black hit
    Lies to the bandana the hit
    Keeping blind and lost
    That was sure a great cost.

    Racking now,up to the skies
    Trying to don't fake any lies
    I know there's a ladder high enough
    But it'll be really tough.

    "stacking rungs one by one
    May i survive with fine tone"

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    very nice Keep doing it :3

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    Quote Originally Posted by hero810 View Post
    very nice Keep doing it :3
    In the future,probably,atm i'm willing to change my style (going to make a thread soon).

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