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    I feel an aching in soul.

    The voices in my head are screaming louder than I can cry.
    Now here I am, in the corner, asking ‘Who am I?’
    Is this real? Am I sane? Is this death? Am I blind?
    Maybe just a perversion of what you call the human mind.
    Please, you have to help me, I think I’m going mad.
    My skull is ashen fire, I now see good is bad.
    My crying now is screaming, and the screaming now is crying.
    My eyes are shattered mirrors, reflecting a daylight dying.
    The stars are now the ground, the moon is now the sun,
    Naught but the gods of nothing, naught but the saviors of none.
    When the earth is changed into a humid dungeon,
    In which Hope like a bat
    Goes beating the walls with her timid wings
    And knocking her head against the rotten ceiling;
    When the rain stretching out its endless train
    Imitates the bars of a vast prison
    And a silent horde of loathsome spiders
    Comes to spin their webs in the depths of our brains,
    All at once the bells leap with rage
    And hurl a frightful roar at heaven,
    Even as wandering spirits with no country
    Burst into a stubborn, whimpering cry.
    — And without drums or music, long hearses
    Pass by slowly in my soul; Hope, vanquished,
    Weeps, and atrocious, despotic Anguish
    On my bowed skull plants her black flag.

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    Beautiful.

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    ​Damn it, thread title fucked up.
    Last edited by Aborted; 12-11-2013 at 06:56 PM.
    When the earth is changed into a humid dungeon,
    In which Hope like a bat
    Goes beating the walls with her timid wings
    And knocking her head against the rotten ceiling;
    When the rain stretching out its endless train
    Imitates the bars of a vast prison
    And a silent horde of loathsome spiders
    Comes to spin their webs in the depths of our brains,
    All at once the bells leap with rage
    And hurl a frightful roar at heaven,
    Even as wandering spirits with no country
    Burst into a stubborn, whimpering cry.
    — And without drums or music, long hearses
    Pass by slowly in my soul; Hope, vanquished,
    Weeps, and atrocious, despotic Anguish
    On my bowed skull plants her black flag.

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    Deep words

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    The poem seems nice, but I can't figure out what you want to say.
    You're going mad, did something happen to you?
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    Is there a place i can see more of your work?

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    Quote Originally Posted by -WhiteNoise View Post
    Is there a place i can see more of your work?
    I generally just write to help deal with my emotions (borderline Schizophrenic), and save them on a folder on my computer.
    I've shared a few before:
    http://www.mpgh.net/forum/760-art-gr...narrative.html
    http://www.mpgh.net/forum/760-art-gr...uns-black.html
    http://www.mpgh.net/forum/760-art-gr...hinations.html
    http://www.mpgh.net/forum/760-art-gr...ooks-sand.html
    When the earth is changed into a humid dungeon,
    In which Hope like a bat
    Goes beating the walls with her timid wings
    And knocking her head against the rotten ceiling;
    When the rain stretching out its endless train
    Imitates the bars of a vast prison
    And a silent horde of loathsome spiders
    Comes to spin their webs in the depths of our brains,
    All at once the bells leap with rage
    And hurl a frightful roar at heaven,
    Even as wandering spirits with no country
    Burst into a stubborn, whimpering cry.
    — And without drums or music, long hearses
    Pass by slowly in my soul; Hope, vanquished,
    Weeps, and atrocious, despotic Anguish
    On my bowed skull plants her black flag.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Aborted View Post
    I generally just write to help deal with my emotions (borderline Schizophrenic), and save them on a folder on my computer.
    I've shared a few before:
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    Thanks for the links. You should consider uploading to an actual artists website.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Aborted View Post

    I generally just write to help deal with my emotions (borderline Schizophrenic), and save them on a folder on my computer.
    I've shared a few before:
    http://www.mpgh.net/forum/760-art-gr...narrative.html
    http://www.mpgh.net/forum/760-art-gr...uns-black.html
    http://www.mpgh.net/forum/760-art-gr...hinations.html
    http://www.mpgh.net/forum/760-art-gr...ooks-sand.html
    That explains it. You ser poetry as a mean to deal with issues. Basicaly the poem doesnt need to convey a meaning, just a way to relax.
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    Quote Originally Posted by gamer4evere View Post

    That explains it. You ser poetry as a mean to deal with issues. Basicaly the poem doesnt need to convey a meaning, just a way to relax.
    ​They do have meaning, just on a more personal level.
    When the earth is changed into a humid dungeon,
    In which Hope like a bat
    Goes beating the walls with her timid wings
    And knocking her head against the rotten ceiling;
    When the rain stretching out its endless train
    Imitates the bars of a vast prison
    And a silent horde of loathsome spiders
    Comes to spin their webs in the depths of our brains,
    All at once the bells leap with rage
    And hurl a frightful roar at heaven,
    Even as wandering spirits with no country
    Burst into a stubborn, whimpering cry.
    — And without drums or music, long hearses
    Pass by slowly in my soul; Hope, vanquished,
    Weeps, and atrocious, despotic Anguish
    On my bowed skull plants her black flag.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Aborted View Post

    ​They do have meaning, just on a more personal level.
    Well, I've never been good with poetry and interpretation so.....
    Write more here, this section is dying again...
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    Deep so deep now make me a sandwich

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    borderline Schizophrenic
    Good luck with that...

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