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    Random Piano Melody

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    ​Recorded on a Roland HP504 and exported to MIDI.
    I am the seer in the dark,
    the vagabond of yore,
    valediction.
    I am the sum of all your parts,
    and proprietor of all.
    A miasma,
    the conclusion,
    blackmonger of Inlé,
    valediction.
    Synapses fray,
    my form now vivid,
    as torpor sets and blood grows tepid.
    With every ounce of flesh now offered,
    I hold your corpse within my coffers.
    Knitted cells now split asunder,
    stand alongside me brother.

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    I feel as if you kept the higher tones for too long at the end.

    Would sound better if they stopped at around 13 - 14 seconds, and then you progressed back down into lower tones until ending.

    Other than that, I really like the beginning.

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