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    Magazine Cover Work

    Give me some feedback if you don't mind.
    This is for a really creative clothing company who specializes in boating apparel.

    This will be the cover for their 2014 fall catalog.



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    Nice clean design, nothing is overly glaring in terms of quality. Work seems professional save the fact that the furthest left model in the picture has a white line splitting him down the middle. If the primary focus of the image is the captain or whomever in the middle of the group, then the positioning is fine because the image draws itself towards the center model. However, if the image is meant to emphasize the entire group, then having one member chopped cleanly in half may pose a small problem. As with all advice, take this with a grain of salt.
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    Quote Originally Posted by PsychoKillaDeadMan View Post
    Nice clean design, nothing is overly glaring in terms of quality. Work seems professional save the fact that the furthest left model in the picture has a white line splitting him down the middle. If the primary focus of the image is the captain or whomever in the middle of the group, then the positioning is fine because the image draws itself towards the center model. However, if the image is meant to emphasize the entire group, then having one member chopped cleanly in half may pose a small problem. As with all advice, take this with a grain of salt.
    Thanks for the detailed response.

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    I like it all except for the white margin lines running across the left and bottom. Other than that it looks professional.

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    I cant see the picture, it's broken.
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    It's not bad, I personally would have formatted this differently though.

    I think it would look better if the large text was aligned to the left, logo on the right and I think the logo should be scaled down to a smaller size.

    That's just my opinion though.

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    it looks nice, but that barcode makes part of it look crap to me.

    I was gonna suggest thickening the horizontal line to cover it but that'll just look eh.

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    I can see now, I like it, simple yet clean and the viewer gets a clean idea of the text there's no crap in between! (8.5/10)
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    I saw barcode I have never seen it before in others picture.. Smart person. 9.9/10 . you don't have 0.1 because I can't see that guy's face.

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    Quote Originally Posted by gamer4evere View Post
    I can see now, I like it, simple yet clean and the viewer gets a clean idea of the text there's no crap in between! (8.5/10)
    It was for an actual mag that would be distributed, so the bar code was a necessity.
    Thanks for the input tho.


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    Left guys leg looks weird, like the knee is alittle to low or something. other than that, it looks good.

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