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    FracturedZ

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    I honestly don't have much to say about these.. This is what I end up going to when I become bored..

    "You talk like a drunk man walks: in every direction but where he be headed."

    “You mean that it’s not only what he does that makes him dangerous, but also what he feels justified in doing?”

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    The first one is better, the fractures contrast better.

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    My largest quip would be that the fractures don't flow very well with the lower layers.
    The depth is off, as they appear to move too far from the base layer.
    When the earth is changed into a humid dungeon,
    In which Hope like a bat
    Goes beating the walls with her timid wings
    And knocking her head against the rotten ceiling;
    When the rain stretching out its endless train
    Imitates the bars of a vast prison
    And a silent horde of loathsome spiders
    Comes to spin their webs in the depths of our brains,
    All at once the bells leap with rage
    And hurl a frightful roar at heaven,
    Even as wandering spirits with no country
    Burst into a stubborn, whimpering cry.
    — And without drums or music, long hearses
    Pass by slowly in my soul; Hope, vanquished,
    Weeps, and atrocious, despotic Anguish
    On my bowed skull plants her black flag.

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    The contrast hits me like knifes in the eyes. Sudden color transitions like those are too agressive for the viewer, you must work it, for example, select the shapes there and feather them, it will help a bit to soften, but there's much more to do alright...
    Not reall y able to help you much more though...
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    It helps enough knowing what kills the overall composition, thank you guys @gamer4evere @Aborted & @Player X

    "You talk like a drunk man walks: in every direction but where he be headed."

    “You mean that it’s not only what he does that makes him dangerous, but also what he feels justified in doing?”

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    First one is better TBH