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    Routt National Forest and Hahn's Peak

    Raw images, no after-work.
    I wasn't able to use my D5300, as I neglected to bring it on my backpacking trip, though I did have a usable Fujiflim that I keep in the car. Just keep that in mind when it comes to image clarity.


    f/8, 1/2000, 400, 10mm






    f/4, 1/1200, 400, 90mm





    f/5.6, 1/1200, 400, 90mm



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    When the earth is changed into a humid dungeon,
    In which Hope like a bat
    Goes beating the walls with her timid wings
    And knocking her head against the rotten ceiling;
    When the rain stretching out its endless train
    Imitates the bars of a vast prison
    And a silent horde of loathsome spiders
    Comes to spin their webs in the depths of our brains,
    All at once the bells leap with rage
    And hurl a frightful roar at heaven,
    Even as wandering spirits with no country
    Burst into a stubborn, whimpering cry.
    — And without drums or music, long hearses
    Pass by slowly in my soul; Hope, vanquished,
    Weeps, and atrocious, despotic Anguish
    On my bowed skull plants her black flag.

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    I like last picture, nice!

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    Criticism anyone?
    When the earth is changed into a humid dungeon,
    In which Hope like a bat
    Goes beating the walls with her timid wings
    And knocking her head against the rotten ceiling;
    When the rain stretching out its endless train
    Imitates the bars of a vast prison
    And a silent horde of loathsome spiders
    Comes to spin their webs in the depths of our brains,
    All at once the bells leap with rage
    And hurl a frightful roar at heaven,
    Even as wandering spirits with no country
    Burst into a stubborn, whimpering cry.
    — And without drums or music, long hearses
    Pass by slowly in my soul; Hope, vanquished,
    Weeps, and atrocious, despotic Anguish
    On my bowed skull plants her black flag.

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    The first I do not like much but the last two are

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    The first one just feels off to me. Like there's just nothing to focus on, it's just one big mess. I don't know, I'm just not feeling it at all.

    The second one has some real emotion to it. Everything about it I absolutely love, and the composition feels pretty strong to me. I would love to see more shots like that, for sure.

    The third one would be pretty great if a more clear shot of the deer was possible, but other than that looks pretty good. Obviously, this is all with no editing so taking that in perspective, they're all pretty damn good looking. You @Ryan and Jimmy need to start posting more. I love looking at the shots every time.

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    These all have little to no composition, so there's not much to critique. I see what you were trying to do with the second, but the railing (I'm assuming that's railing) takes up too much of the foreground and ruins the shot.

    Why is your ISO at 400? Is that the minimum?

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