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    MY PISS RAP WOOHOOO

    heres my grammer corrected walmart influenced rap

    I gotta pee so bad
    Man you wouldn’t believe
    Tryin to get to the restroom
    And find myself some relief

    But when I get inside
    Dear god it stinks
    There’s crap on the floor
    There’s piss in the sink

    Now i'm bout' to throw up
    Or pass out from the smell
    Its almost like I died
    And went to some crap-hole hell

    And the janitor just left
    Yeah, you think it be gleamin
    He probly couldn’t stand it ether
    Probly why he was screamin

    At least I can go
    Glad I don’t have to sit
    There was somthin in that toilet
    And I don’t think it was shit


    If i made you day better thank me or ill stab u in the gums w/ a screwdriver.

    and heres a link to my poem hunter prof

    Poet: Donovan Bob Immerman - All poems of Donovan Bob Immerman

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    Nice, It was beautiful man brought a tear to my eye. but witch ne??? ill never tell

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    Lol. That was actually pretty good, and funny! xD

    "Every gun that is made, every warship launched, every rocket fired signifies, in the final sense, a theft from those who hunger and are not fed, those who are cold and are not clothed. This world in arms is not spending money alone. It is spending the sweat of its laborers, the genius of its scientists, the hopes of its children. The cost of one modern heavy bomber is this: a modern brick school in more than 30 cities. It is two electric power plants, each serving a town of 60,000 population. It is two fine, fully equipped hospitals. It is some fifty miles of concrete pavement. We pay for a single fighter plane with a half million bushels of wheat. We pay for a single destroyer with new homes that could have housed more than 8,000 people. This is, I repeat, the best way of life to be found on the road the world has been taking. This is not a way of life at all, in any true sense. Under the cloud of threatening war, it is humanity hanging from a cross of iron."
    - Dwight D. Eisenhower

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    Hahaha I love the last two stanzas.

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    Quote Originally Posted by why06 View Post
    Lol. That was actually pretty good, and funny! xD
    I was raised on the art of awesome, and dairy products.

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    epiccc ima sing it every time i got to go

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    Lol....i throw up a lil everytime

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