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    Critique this wallpaper i made.

    I made this wallpaper and i would like some critique, Tell me what you LIKE about it and what you DON't like and what could have been better.
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    If that's a fractal I like what you did/ used it.
    And I'm sorry you didn't want this but you have to have some critique if you wish to get better.
    The black stripes just kinda ruin it... Maybe give it some flow from the fractal you used?

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    The concept is fine (a render with basic background and something splashy around it) however the execution is really lacking.

    I think the black stripes are a positive addition as plain black would be terrible, however the fractal doesn't fit.

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    I agree with Soren, but other than that, i like it and i would use it :P

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    The stripes create flow in the exact opposite direction of the fractal and render. They need to go.

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    Very good ^^

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    Clean design, my favorite spectrum of color.
    Motive lacks originality.

    Good contrasts.

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