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    Question First Photoshop CS6 Concept

    Hello,


    I recently tried to make something in Adobe Photoshop CS6. It would be really awesome if you could give me some feedback (positive and negative!)




    • Should I do it with or without the girl on the background? I tried to implement some "living" creatures in there, but it seems it doesn't really work out well!



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    Firstly, screw attachments. Use websites like imgur or tinypic to upload your images, then share them with the [img] tag or by just pasting the link.
    Also, what's the point of making two images with different size if you don't need to?

    As for the image itself: The girl has to go as she's just completely blurred and just distracts.
    You also forced depth by blurring the C4D, which is almost every single time a terrible choice, especially due to the fact it isn't blurred all the same amount and the background isn't blurred at all.
    Also, the music track graph thing you placed on the bottom of the text (don't really know its specific name) is half blurred and half super-sharp.
    Awkwardly, the sharpened area looks awful as it's just a crappy mass of pixels that way, the blurred part makes no sense instead.
    Also, you should align the text so that it finishes at the same column (right now "designs" is a little more to the left) as you've decided to place the first word to an arbitrary offset to the left, but it isn't aligned regardless.

    Basically: Check if your design choices make sense, check if your design execution is done well, pay more attention to details especially if you plan to look neat and professional.

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    Thank you for the feedback, I personally choose the text just to be that. I tried to get some in-depth compared the front- and the background.

    And btw, I've got no idea neither why it set me up with an attachment..

    And about the "screw attachments". I've got to get some posts to post links

    So what's the perfect design execution if I may ask?

    Thanks again for the feedback.
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    Quote Originally Posted by AmnartYT View Post
    Thank you for the feedback, I personally choose the text just to be that. I tried to get some in-depth compared the front- and the background.

    And btw, I've got no idea neither why it set me up with an attachment..

    And about the "screw attachments". I've got to get some posts to post links

    So what's the perfect design execution if I may ask?

    Thanks again for the feedback.
    To be honest, there is no perfect design execution. You can execute a design in many different ways for different outcomes and it may come out bad or good. It just takes a lot of practice and learning to understand how to use your skills correctly. If you want to execute something, more correctly, I suppose you might say is to use the Golden Ratio.

    Example:


    Everything kinda follows that sort natural spiral, it's what attracts the eye and leads you through the entire peace of work.

    Try researching different forms of Graphic Design, learning new things always helps.
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    I would say without the girl maybe find a image of somone shooting something out of their hands and change it up.

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