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    Photo-manipulation

    So you guys have told me to work on my lighting
    So I spent the past 2 weeks working on that
    here is one of my projects I did in that time.
    It's not best lighting but it's way better than previous works


    Please give PROPER CnC


    Please note : I was not going for a proper finished art piece just a good lighting
    Last edited by Organized Chaos; 10-17-2014 at 09:55 PM.

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    I think it actually looks pretty cool, nice.

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    Lines are nonparallel and all over the place. Way too clustered and busy, while not even having a focal point. The text looks terrible, and is just about as unreadable as it could possibly be. The smoke brushes are way too prevalent, and are just overwhelming.

    Also, you talk about lighting but there is no lighting to go off of in this. There's no render or focal point to look at, and the only thing that would produce light in this picture anyways is the two massively ugly flares you put in there. I wouldn't even call this a piece of art, sorry.

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    Deflorate is simply spot on: the main focus should've been lights not flares...which aren't fitting either.

    Just...re-do!

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    Quote Originally Posted by IV2B View Post
    Deflorate is simply spot on: the main focus should've been lights not flares...which aren't fitting either.

    Just...re-do!
    Will do mate
    Thanks for you opinion
    I realized that this was terrible lel

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    Quote Originally Posted by SorenOwlProd View Post
    Will do mate
    Thanks for you opinion
    I realized that this was terrible lel
    I tried to tell you.. xP Without being to harsh.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Invis. View Post

    I tried to tell you.. xP Without being to harsh.
    Shhhhhhhhhhh
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