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    Edges are rough, colors need work, and it's really hard to read at first glance. What's with the whited out parts of some letters?
    Keep practicing, you'll get better.



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    Quote Originally Posted by Deflorate. View Post


    /topkek

    Alright bud. You're laughable.
    As so are you

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    I'm sorry but...it's just bad.
    First, every word is too sharp and rough, but aside that:
    the H: The left part's white mask isn't applied well and doesn't fit
    the A: The inside of the triangle isn't done well and some edges are cut in the inside
    the X: The white part is confusing and the yellow/black scheme looks remarkably weird
    the C: Looks more like an O, the white mask on the bottom is simply bad.
    the O: The triangle cuts aren't equal and of bad quality
    the R: Looks like a P and an L together, the shape is really weird and the scheme of colors isn't appealing at all
    the E: The distance between each horizontal line isn't the same, looks like a fat I.

    Basically, each letter has many things to improve and if i was given the xcf/pdf file, i'd rather start from scratch than salvaging the work already done.

    Now that the quality of the logo has been discussed, please, understand experience is different than contribution and each post you make should be relevant to the discussion, even just a part of it.
    Also, avoid discussing harshly with other members: if you have nothing worthy to add in each post, then either PM your reply to target user OR avoid posting, just like how i've done in the past when discussing with you or other members.
    The same should apply to @Deflorate. as well: i hate to check my daily mentions/quotes and see flame wars like the one this.
    Really, any point is proven false the moment you sound like a kid.

    So yeah, keep improving and try to accomodate negative feedback. If you think life is made of compliments then consider committing suicide or, better yet, become a monk.

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    @suicidal
    just man up and deal with it.
    Constructive criticism isn't always going to be overly positive.
    and when you tell the same person the same thing over and over again, and they still ask for CnC/reject advice of course some people are going to swear?

    As said before, edges are rough and look badly cut out, colour scheme could be a bit better (the faded colours look bad imo), also, is there any reason why there's a jolt in the A with the white line/_arrow going through?

    also the X and O are out of proportion with the rest of the text.

    lots of improvement needed, but for someone partially blind it's ok.
    Last edited by GypsyGenocide; 10-28-2014 at 10:04 PM.

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    Man, i'm sorry but i gotta speak up.
    Im sick of your attitude towards other artists.. They are trying to help you grow and get better and point out your flaws that you need to work on! they are not bashing your work, they only bash your work when you retaliate on them for no reason.. You can't take CnC and that's the truth, I use to be just like you..
    if they would sugar coat your work then you wouldn't get better..

    so stop with the flaming everyone.. before people just don't even bother to post on your work and help you at all.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Mr.Seyeko View Post
    Man, i'm sorry but i gotta speak up.
    Im sick of your attitude towards other artists.. They are trying to help you grow and get better and point out your flaws that you need to work on! they are not bashing your work, they only bash your work when you retaliate on them for no reason.. You can't take CnC and that's the truth, I use to be just like you..
    if they would sugar coat your work then you wouldn't get better..

    so stop with the flaming everyone.. before people just don't even bother to post on your work and help you at all.
    He's speaking for everyone here. Take the criticism, it'll help you a lot.



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    Look's nice, but it took my half a minut to see it said Haxcore...

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