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    Color scheme could be way better
    There is like no depth which is a huge factor and takes a lot away from this signature.
    There really isn't a focal point besides you're main render.
    Your lighting is horrifying
    But those 2 like falling leaves in thee upper left corner I really enjoy.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Organized Chaos View Post
    Color scheme could be way better
    There is like no depth which is a huge factor and takes a lot away from this signature.
    There really isn't a focal point besides you're main render.
    Your lighting is horrifying
    But those 2 like falling leaves in thee upper left corner I really enjoy.
    Actually i disagree: the color scheme i see is pink/purple and green, which works.
    Also there should be only one focal point, which is her face, thus it's not an issue at all.

    I see the left side of the render (her hair) is cut, plus that kind of silk/petal/brush placed on top of everything kind of messes with the overall image.
    Some parts' color is low quality(for example bottom left, or just above her eyes), some sharpening may help.

    Aside that i think it's a fine sig. =)

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    Quote Originally Posted by IV2B View Post
    Actually i disagree: the color scheme i see is pink/purple and green, which works.
    Also there should be only one focal point, which is her face, thus it's not an issue at all.

    I see the left side of the render (her hair) is cut, plus that kind of silk/petal/brush placed on top of everything kind of messes with the overall image.
    Some parts' color is low quality(for example bottom left, or just above her eyes), some sharpening may help.

    Aside that i think it's a fine sig. =)
    But where's thee depth and lighting?

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    try and make the colours brighter and increase the contrast of her outline

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    Quote Originally Posted by Organized Chaos View Post


    But where's thee depth and lighting?
    Well, the light source should be center-bottom, instead it's right in the middle. Thus yes it's off but not that much tbh.
    Depth is given by the objects next to her repeated in a smaller version, thus they look further.

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    thanks for all the advice I hope to improve

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    Danganronpa? xD if not looks like her a lot.
    Im just not in favor of the green parts, try put in there pink or purple or a bit of white.
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    Quote Originally Posted by IV2B View Post
    Well, the light source should be center-bottom, instead it's right in the middle. Thus yes it's off but not that much tbh.
    Depth is given by the objects next to her repeated in a smaller version, thus they look further.
    Agreed but still I think a better stock could've been used to give it more detailing depth,
    or it could be that I'm just focused on working on depth on my own so x.x

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