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    Ezel Revision~mine~

    @IV2B ; found a copy of the original that you used and made my own.. It didn't turn out well..


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    ~self rendered version~ Was just a white background so.. y'know..

     


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    Last edited by taken4time; 12-26-2014 at 09:04 AM.

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    What are thee scratches?
    What the hell did you do x.x
    This looks gross...

    There is a glowing circle like thing on thee card *which I can get* but I would've made it more of a flare.
    And then you added another one too like her neck, this is taking away from the focal which should be her/his face and thee card.
    First one by far is better, it isn't blurred and distorted, but I see no light source, but it is apparent there is one from upper right corner which is better than none.
    Never ever, edit your render at your level of experience.
    Depth could be improved a lot, as it looks flat to me
    And thee background doesn't really fit as thee direction of the render seems to go from lower right ---> upper left, so it is actually confusing in some ways, but it does work. It would just look better if you fixed that. But what you have now is also fine.
    Over all you need to work on Depth, finding focals and placing them correctly and making thee sig evolve around them.
    Lighting could be worked on but it's not bad from what I can see.
    It's not bad, it's just not thee best.

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    Well, the main flaw is that the focal point should've either been his head or his card... but since you've been scratching and blurring them...
    His tail looks bitten too
    What i like are mostly the background and those tiny horizzontal lines you've added on top of him.
    The rest is no good tho i'm afraid. :s
    By the way, thank you for finding a render, i should remake my own now but i'm afraid i'm too lazy to. x)
    Maybe in some time i'll give it a whole new spin altogether.

    Quote Originally Posted by Organized Chaos View Post
    What are thee scratches?
    What the hell did you do x.x
    This looks gross...

    There is a glowing circle like thing on thee card *which I can get* but I would've made it more of a flare.
    And then you added another one too like her neck, this is taking away from the focal which should be her/his face and thee card.
    First one by far is better, it isn't blurred and distorted, but I see no light source, but it is apparent there is one from upper right corner which is better than none.
    Never ever, edit your render at your level of experience.
    Depth could be improved a lot, as it looks flat to me
    And thee background doesn't really fit as thee direction of the render seems to go from lower right ---> upper left, so it is actually confusing in some ways, but it does work. It would just look better if you fixed that. But what you have now is also fine.
    Over all you need to work on Depth, finding focals and placing them correctly and making thee sig evolve around them.
    Lighting could be worked on but it's not bad from what I can see.
    It's not bad, it's just not thee best.
    Actually depth is one of the few things done right: there's clearly some place behind the render.
    Btw, your post is quality hypocrisy. x)
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    Quote Originally Posted by IV2B View Post
    Well, the main flaw is that the focal point should've either been his head or his card... but since you've been scratching and blurring them...
    His tail looks bitten too
    What i like are mostly the background and those tiny horizzontal lines you've added on top of him.
    The rest is no good tho i'm afraid. :s
    By the way, thank you for finding a render, i should remake my own now but i'm afraid i'm too lazy to. x)
    Maybe in some time i'll give it a whole new spin altogether.



    Actually depth is one of the few things done right: there's clearly some place behind the render.
    Btw, your post is quality hypocrisy. x)
    It's flat
    It doesn't look 3D it looks like someone took a 2d picture

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    Quote Originally Posted by Organized Chaos View Post


    It's flat
    It doesn't look 3D it looks like someone took a 2d picture
    This is a 2D image, yet it has depth.
    Sorcery?

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    as I said; and before I even posted; I tried it and it didn't end up well

    and just fyi; this is the effect I was going for and failed horribly at;
    http://abbeymarie.deviantart.com/art...rial-348221240
    Last edited by taken4time; 12-26-2014 at 02:03 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by IV2B View Post
    This is a 2D image, yet it has depth.
    Sorcery?
    Okay, it has little depth compared to your works and maybe like 1 or 2 of mine.
    Thee depth could be improved way more.
    Happy ?


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    Quote Originally Posted by taken4time View Post
    as I said; and before I even posted; I tried it and it didn't end up well

    and just fyi; this is the effect I was going for and failed horribly at;
    http://abbeymarie.deviantart.com/art...rial-348221240
    Yea you edited render instead of adding a new layer it looks like, you stayed in black and white.
    Kinda hard to do this effect in all black and white as there needs to be a color contrast between the glass and thee render so you can like see through the glass and see there is something behind it

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    Quote Originally Posted by Organized Chaos View Post


    Okay, it has little depth compared to your works and maybe like 1 or 2 of mine.
    Thee depth could be improved way more.
    Happy ?


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    Yea you edited render instead of adding a new layer it looks like, you stayed in black and white.
    Kinda hard to do this effect in all black and white as there needs to be a color contrast between the glass and thee render so you can like see through the glass and see there is something behind it
    I duplicated and masked it; clearly not to good effect..

    "You talk like a drunk man walks: in every direction but where he be headed."

    “You mean that it’s not only what he does that makes him dangerous, but also what he feels justified in doing?”

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    First one was getting good, but then you blurred it and got weird. :S
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    Quote Originally Posted by taken4time View Post
    I duplicated and masked it; clearly not to good effect..
    yes yes yes yes
    pls gib this man a cookie he speaks da truf
    *you*
    *me*
    /lel

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    Quote Originally Posted by Organized Chaos View Post


    yes yes yes yes
    pls gib this man a cookie he speaks da truf
    *you*
    *me*
    /lel
    It's hard for a man to admit he's wrong, it's even harder to admit he has weakness. X:

    Either way, thank you all for CNC; and I'm sorry for the blindness this atrocity has caused.

    "You talk like a drunk man walks: in every direction but where he be headed."

    “You mean that it’s not only what he does that makes him dangerous, but also what he feels justified in doing?”

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    Quote Originally Posted by taken4time View Post
    It's hard for a man to admit he's wrong, it's even harder to admit he has weakness. X:

    Either way, thank you all for CNC; and I'm sorry for the blindness this atrocity has caused.
    Yo dude you tried, practice makes perfect honestly.

    @Organized Chaos you are in no way shape or form professional at designing. Lay off a little, you look like the biggest dick out there at the moment especially the fact that some of your work is no better than this. You need to realize all of this and stop being so ignorant.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Democritus View Post


    Yo dude you tried, practice makes perfect honestly.

    @Organized Chaos you are in no way shape or form professional at designing. Lay off a little, you look like the biggest dick out there at the moment especially the fact that some of your work is no better than this. You need to realize all of this and stop being so ignorant.
    Thank you but, in all honesty this sig was just a fail. X:

    "You talk like a drunk man walks: in every direction but where he be headed."

    “You mean that it’s not only what he does that makes him dangerous, but also what he feels justified in doing?”

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    Quote Originally Posted by Democritus View Post


    Yo dude you tried, practice makes perfect honestly.

    @Organized Chaos you are in no way shape or form professional at designing. Lay off a little, you look like the biggest dick out there at the moment especially the fact that some of your work is no better than this. You need to realize all of this and stop being so ignorant.
    Okay, thanks for being thee local psychologist!

    Lel what an Opinion dude, opinions are like assholes and I plan to ignore all of them.
    That are not proper CnC
    Or something that is in my intrest
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