Page 1 of 2 12 LastLast
Results 1 to 15 of 20
  1. #1
    Mokou-Sama's Avatar
    Join Date
    Sep 2010
    Gender
    male
    Location
    Akihabara
    Posts
    9,808
    Reputation
    442
    Thanks
    663
    My Mood
    Breezy

    A fairly better attempt?

    How about this one?

    Formerly known as gamer4evere



     
    Participated on:
    MPGH GAMING NIGHT 08/03/2015 - Town of Salem



  2. #2
    KillTheNoise's Avatar
    Join Date
    May 2013
    Gender
    male
    Location
    Depression
    Posts
    4,846
    Reputation
    822
    Thanks
    2,149
    My Mood
    Aggressive
    I know where you got that jinx image

    Looks good I like the smoky effect

  3. #3
    Organized Chaos's Avatar
    Join Date
    Mar 2014
    Gender
    male
    Location
    evrythan puprle man
    Posts
    4,364
    Reputation
    526
    Thanks
    1,211
    My Mood
    Lurking
    Render looks way to sharpened
    Other wise it's nice, kinda boring thou
    Colors are really nice as well

  4. #4
    ヽಠ_ಠᕤ Headrockin' ᕦಠ_ಠ╯
    MPGH Member
    IV2B's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2011
    Gender
    male
    Posts
    1,095
    Reputation
    74
    Thanks
    187
    My Mood
    Inspired
    It seems somebody has been sharpening that render a little too much... just look at her face, it's so sharp dots begun to appear over her face lol.
    Aside that, i don't really understand those little vertical lines, they make the background look flat, like it's a canvas or something similiar.
    The grey text is barely noticeable yet really annoying, so is the border.

    Hint: before making changes (like the sharpened render) undo and redo to review the edit, then choose the better looking one.

  5. #5
    Threadstarter
    Do not Trade - Blacklisted
    Permanently
    MPGH Member
    Mokou-Sama's Avatar
    Join Date
    Sep 2010
    Gender
    male
    Location
    Akihabara
    Posts
    9,808
    Reputation
    442
    Thanks
    663
    My Mood
    Breezy
    Quote Originally Posted by IV2B View Post
    It seems somebody has been sharpening that render a little too much... just look at her face, it's so sharp dots begun to appear over her face lol.
    Aside that, i don't really understand those little vertical lines, they make the background look flat, like it's a canvas or something similiar.
    The grey text is barely noticeable yet really annoying, so is the border.

    Hint: before making changes (like the sharpened render) undo and redo to review the edit, then choose the better looking one.
    Yeah, I guess its a matter of taste, I like sharpened renders
    But the text is supposed to be just a mark, so that isnt really stealable. The vertical lines are a texture I wanted to give an "Old movie" style (but a subtle touch only)
    I guess I need to work a bit more.
    Formerly known as gamer4evere



     
    Participated on:
    MPGH GAMING NIGHT 08/03/2015 - Town of Salem



  6. #6
    ヽಠ_ಠᕤ Headrockin' ᕦಠ_ಠ╯
    MPGH Member
    IV2B's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2011
    Gender
    male
    Posts
    1,095
    Reputation
    74
    Thanks
    187
    My Mood
    Inspired
    Quote Originally Posted by gamer4evere View Post

    Yeah, I guess its a matter of taste, I like sharpened renders
    But the text is supposed to be just a mark, so that isnt really stealable. The vertical lines are a texture I wanted to give an "Old movie" style (but a subtle touch only)
    I guess I need to work a bit more.
    A rule of the thumb as far as sharpening is concerned is to stop when you see that shading turns into dots.
    By the way, if you need any help improving, i'd be glad to help. =)

  7. #7
    Threadstarter
    Do not Trade - Blacklisted
    Permanently
    MPGH Member
    Mokou-Sama's Avatar
    Join Date
    Sep 2010
    Gender
    male
    Location
    Akihabara
    Posts
    9,808
    Reputation
    442
    Thanks
    663
    My Mood
    Breezy
    Quote Originally Posted by IV2B View Post
    A rule of the thumb as far as sharpening is concerned is to stop when you see that shading turns into dots.
    By the way, if you need any help improving, i'd be glad to help. =)
    Thanks will do when I make another sig. Probably tomorrow or in a couple days
    Formerly known as gamer4evere



     
    Participated on:
    MPGH GAMING NIGHT 08/03/2015 - Town of Salem



  8. #8
    PandemicZ's Avatar
    Join Date
    Dec 2014
    Gender
    male
    Posts
    20
    Reputation
    10
    Thanks
    1
    Thats pretty sick art!

  9. #9
    Threadstarter
    Do not Trade - Blacklisted
    Permanently
    MPGH Member
    Mokou-Sama's Avatar
    Join Date
    Sep 2010
    Gender
    male
    Location
    Akihabara
    Posts
    9,808
    Reputation
    442
    Thanks
    663
    My Mood
    Breezy
    Quote Originally Posted by PandemicZ View Post
    Thats pretty sick art!
    Thanks, I plan on working on other sigs when I can and improve the technique.
    Formerly known as gamer4evere



     
    Participated on:
    MPGH GAMING NIGHT 08/03/2015 - Town of Salem



  10. #10
    David.'s Avatar
    Join Date
    Jul 2009
    Gender
    male
    Location
    ก็็็็็็็็็็็็็&#
    Posts
    2,888
    Reputation
    556
    Thanks
    2,443
    My Mood
    Amazed
    Change The BackGround Looks Sucks

  11. #11
    MauserSrg's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2015
    Gender
    male
    Posts
    7
    Reputation
    10
    Thanks
    1
    Change the coulers!

  12. #12
    Threadstarter
    Do not Trade - Blacklisted
    Permanently
    MPGH Member
    Mokou-Sama's Avatar
    Join Date
    Sep 2010
    Gender
    male
    Location
    Akihabara
    Posts
    9,808
    Reputation
    442
    Thanks
    663
    My Mood
    Breezy
    Quote Originally Posted by David. View Post
    Change The BackGround Looks Sucks
    Quote Originally Posted by MauserSrg View Post
    Change the coulers!
    Change colors to what? develop your answers so I can get there
    Formerly known as gamer4evere



     
    Participated on:
    MPGH GAMING NIGHT 08/03/2015 - Town of Salem



  13. #13
    Divine.'s Avatar
    Join Date
    Nov 2012
    Gender
    male
    Location
    #dreamchasers
    Posts
    92
    Reputation
    10
    Thanks
    5
    Looks sexy af. Well done.

  14. The Following User Says Thank You to Divine. For This Useful Post:

    Mokou-Sama (01-08-2015)

  15. #14
    Aurifiy's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jun 2012
    Gender
    male
    Posts
    13
    Reputation
    10
    Thanks
    2
    I like it but I think you could improve
    The background in my opinion just looks weird, I like the effects you added but I think a new background would make it better.
    In my opinion it's too... "boring" it doesn't really pop, The render also looks way too sharpened but hey I guess everyone has a different opinion other than that it looks good, love Jinx as well

    Good job man

  16. #15
    Rattfat's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jun 2013
    Gender
    male
    Posts
    4
    Reputation
    10
    Thanks
    0
    Not bad^^ Good job

Page 1 of 2 12 LastLast

Similar Threads

  1. My 1st Photoshop Attempt
    By Jackal in forum Art & Graphic Design
    Replies: 13
    Last Post: 07-20-2006, 06:43 AM
  2. Which sig looks better
    By Killclowns in forum Art & Graphic Design
    Replies: 5
    Last Post: 02-10-2006, 08:13 AM
  3. What do ya like better?
    By i eat trees in forum Entertainment
    Replies: 5
    Last Post: 02-09-2006, 11:57 PM
  4. 2nd sig much better!
    By darkone1149 in forum Art & Graphic Design
    Replies: 5
    Last Post: 02-08-2006, 06:15 PM