The flow is dope, many effects (his right arm and the lights on the weapons for example) are very well done, it looks to me like he slashed his way through the c4d.
Unluckily some parts are indeed to sharp (the fingers for example) and the colors/lighting are lacking ( those shiny weapon effects are supposed to shine, but they cast shadows? ;D).
Just like to add I haven't made a tag in maybe 2.5 years. So wasn't really expecting to knock this out of the park. Actually, the last thing I did was a collab with Austin, so technically longer. This was an old .psd that I decided to finish. Got about 10-12 unfinished tags in .psd form. Weather has been shit around here and I need a break from gaming so might finish those tags up. Who knows. Thanks for the comments and feedback.
Sorry jimmy but this one just doesn't do it, i know you can do better
The flow is out of whack and the c4d's placed weirdly throw the piece off.
Blending could be better. same with lighting and it looks like you over sharpened a lot of parts and tried to force your depth by over blurring
also the contrast is way off.. you have a super dark background and then the focal is really bright which is weird.. it throws the lighting off..
keep at it.. good to see some stuff from you but this just isnt up to par with some of your other stuff.
The fact that you don't see soft brushing means it's done well. You should never be able to see any particular technique in a tag (such as soft brushing) but rather the culmination of the techniques. It'd be like using touch up paint on a scratch. If you could see that it was touch up paint then it wouldn't be a very good job. But if you didn't notice anything, well then that's a good job. Not complimenting jimmy or anything just trying to help explain.