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    My attempt.

    Watching a few PS tutorials for ideas for a new style for me.

    Used his resources, with my own render.





    Opinions?

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    Looks good man the only thing you could do to improve it would be to move the "DEMO GRAPHICS" more into the corner just a little thing that I noticed
    Last edited by KillTheNoise; 01-11-2015 at 03:42 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by KillTheNoise View Post
    Looks good man the only thing you could do to improve it would be to more the "DEMO GRAPHICS" more into the corner just a little thing that I noticed
    Greatly appreciate the feedback, will fix.

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    i like it especially as lee sin is one of my favorite jungle nice attempt

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    Two concerns:
    The first is the demo graphics text, as already mentioned, when you put text in your images you should either make it fancy or not put it.
    The second one is the render's quality, as it's really blurred.

    Otherwise, fine job.

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    Everything seems super blurry.
    The render looks like it was sharpened to much.
    Those flare lines I feel could have a more glow effect or do something more to make it look "depthened" if you know what I mean? Maybe not x.x
    That c4d next to his head looks like a brown shit on brain xD
    Sorry about that
    But the flow is nice ^_^

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    Apart the background there's too much blur especially on the render.
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    Looks very good to me. Keep up the good work. You will continue to improve.

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