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    Well here's another piece!

    Hope you enjoy
    @Doc @IV2B @Ryan @deflorate

    Sorry about the blurry hexagons to the left,
    I would fix it, but I put to much time in this piece as is so fuck it
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    Quote Originally Posted by Organized Chaos View Post
    Well here's another piece!

    Hope you enjoy
    @Doc @IV2B @Ryan @deflorate

    Sorry about the blurry hexagons to the left,
    I would fix it, but I put to much time in this piece as is so fuck it
    It's a pretty quick fix if you have the .psd...

    Not a huge fan of the colors. You're all over the spectrum with the C4Ds. Choosing a scheme would do this some good.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ryan View Post


    It's a pretty quick fix if you have the .psd...

    Not a huge fan of the colors. You're all over the spectrum with the C4Ds. Choosing a scheme would do this some good.
    It has 4 colors x.x
    Red, yellow, green, blue
    But thanks

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    Quote Originally Posted by Organized Chaos View Post


    It has 4 colors x.x
    Red, yellow, green, blue
    But thanks
    That's what I mean. Those aren't a scheme. You have all the primary colors plus one. It's a bit too much.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ryan View Post


    That's what I mean. Those aren't a scheme. You have all the primary colors plus one. It's a bit too much.
    It's what it's suppose to look like, but whatevs.
    We gots our opinions

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    I honestly don't know why anyone gives you any criticism still. All you do is try to sit there and defend everything instead of actually taking the criticism and improving your work.

    "Yeah, I was going for the, 'my 2 year old drew this,' kind of look.. So it's okay that it looks like shit."

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    there is decent depth in the tag, but as ryan said the color scheme is really off
    by color scheme we mean that generally you should use colors that look nice with each other, in your tag its more like the default colors of those c4ds put together
    you can change the color of those c4d by changing the hue (ctrl+u on photoshop) a good color scheme that works with sci-fi tags are like red and blue or cyan and lime

    I think the hexagon things are probably from a bg or stock, you can increase the quality by first opening the image as a separate file first on Photoshop and then clicking ctrl+a which will select it all and then moving it into your sig space. this keeps the original dimensions of the stock and doesnt make it blurry when you go to resize it. then probably sharpening it would do the trick

    the random blue softbrush at the bg in the top center doesnt fit in with the tag and really contrast with the c4d that is above it

    keep working on your c4d manipulations and if you need help or advice just hit me up

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    Please stop with the text

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    Quote Originally Posted by KillTheNoise View Post
    Please stop with the text
    I don't think he want's people stealing his artwork.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Wash View Post


    I don't think he want's people stealing his artwork.
    If you think artwork is stolen its extremely easy to back-trace and see who's trying to claim it as there own. Text destroys alot of pieces unless done extremely well