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    A SOTW Submission

    Ay,

    So I did not follow a tutorial or anything, I am proud of this piece I spent a lot of time into it!
    Enjoy!
    @Mr.Seyeko @IV2B @Ryan @Doc CnC please?
    Last edited by Organized Chaos; 02-10-2015 at 07:23 PM.

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    I can see you're improving but the C4D's are too contrasted so basically it looks like little spots of colour with no structure behind it. There's no direction or depth in regards to the focal point, I'm left trying to figure out her position in relation to everything else, is she in the foreground/middle/background. Too chaotic, you're trying to put everything you've learnt into a single piece. There's improvement but you more or less need to work on composition.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Doc View Post
    I can see you're improving but the C4D's are too contrasted so basically it looks like little spots of colour with no structure behind it. There's no direction or depth in regards to the focal point, I'm left trying to figure out her position in relation to everything else, is she in the foreground/middle/background. Too chaotic, you're trying to put everything you've learnt into a single piece. There's improvement but you more or less need to work on composition.
    Thanks
    So like this?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Organized Chaos View Post

    Thanks
    So like this?
    Yes that is a lot better, but the c4d's are still rather overwhelming.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Doc View Post


    Yes that is a lot better, but the c4d's are still rather overwhelming.
    Sorry,
    how much better did I improve on this one?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Organized Chaos View Post


    Sorry,
    how much better did I improve on this one?
    Well around the focal it is a lot cleaner and stand out more, but the c4d's are still going everywhere not to mention the background is now sharpened more than she is.

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    Looks really cool, I would even use it as my wallpaper

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    Quote Originally Posted by Doc View Post


    Well around the focal it is a lot cleaner and stand out more, but the c4d's are still going everywhere not to mention the background is now sharpened more than she is.
    Background wasn't sharped at all lol
    It's just at the beginning it looked fine and when I added everything it turned idk gross

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    Quote Originally Posted by Organized Chaos View Post

    Background wasn't sharped at all lol
    It's just at the beginning it looked fine and when I added everything it turned idk gross


    The parts in red are oversharpened. The part in blue is where here arm should be but the c4d is on top and the way the c4d is designed really throws off the depth.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Doc View Post




    The parts in red are oversharpened. The part in blue is where here arm should be but the c4d is on top and the way the c4d is designed really throws off the depth.
    Actually thats not sharpened just a lot of dodge right there with different colors and so it messed it up and i mean color not dodge

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    Quote Originally Posted by Organized Chaos View Post


    Actually thats not sharpened just a lot of dodge right there with different colors and so it messed it up and i mean color not dodge
    It's just a low quality background. That's all.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Organized Chaos View Post


    Actually thats not sharpened just a lot of dodge right there with different colors and so it messed it up and i mean color not dodge
    Then don't do that? Stop trying to weasel your way out of criticism.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Doc View Post

    Then don't do that? Stop trying to weasel your way out of criticism.
    Y u always doing this!?!?
    You say something, and I'll I'm trying to say is that no what actually happened is this!
    No matter what I do even if I agree I'm still a fucking target... I've done nothing wrong but correct you, stop being a asshole.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Organized Chaos View Post

    Y u always doing this!?!?
    You say something, and I'll I'm trying to say is that no what actually happened is this!
    No matter what I do even if I agree I'm still a fucking target... I've done nothing wrong but correct you, stop being a asshole.
    Someone critiques you and then you go "no it's not actually that, its this" when you should accept that it looks bad and avoid doing it next time. You ask me for fucking CnC and then you make excuses up for everything.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Doc View Post


    Someone critiques you and then you go "no it's not actually that, its this" when you should accept that it looks bad and avoid doing it next time. You ask me for fucking CnC and then you make excuses up for everything.
    I'm correcting you, and if you know what I did, it will help you do CnC better instead of just guessing what happened lol?
    Anyway I appreciate what you said

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