Lighting, depth, and how you make your piece needs huge improvement.
Why is the smudging come in from an opposite direction then of thee render itself? jw
And the text is ehhh... I would leave out text till like you go hardcore pro, cause I still suck with text lmao
This piece lacks tons of depth.
I would just go onto DA = www.deviantart.com *Make a an account as well, upload your pieces there so people and yourself can watch you progress*
Like me, you can tell I sucked dick way back 7 months ago. http://suicidial.deviantart.com/
But yea go onto Da and just search "Signature tutorials"
LIGHTING IS SO IMPORTANT! PLEASE LOOK AT THIS TUTORIAL AS WELL! http://i5.minus.com/ic6TwST6LrxS0.jpg click on it to zoom in.
Don't just read it too read it man, read it to learn and understand.
Hope this helps! :P
#noshrek, its okay man