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    Another one






    Top is a really basic tag, I kinda failed at the whole underwater scheme. Bottom is a weird abstract that I made, that I kinda like.

    CnC @Organized Chaos ( @MC² sorry if you didn't wanna be tagged you seem to know what you're doing)
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    Theres no blending in neither and the focal is really small in the first one with huge text right in the middle..

    Read some beginner tuts


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    Quote Originally Posted by Mr.Seyeko View Post
    Theres no blending in neither and the focal is really small in the first one with huge text right in the middle..

    Read some beginner tuts
    Will do, thanks for the input.

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    For the first GFX there's no BLENDING at all. The placement of the render is really bad. The font and the placement of the text is really bad. Here's some tips that can make your gfx way better. First, find better quality fonts and background. Maybe like planetrenders. Second, try to blend your render with the background. You can smuge it but find the background that fits the render. Third, Try not putting any text of any of your gfx before you master good placement with your rendering, blending, and much more. Finding the right font and the right placement of the text is pretty hard so don't do that for the time being. Read some tuts and watch some youtube video! You'll get better!

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    Quote Originally Posted by DuhAsianX32 View Post
    For the first GFX there's no BLENDING at all. The placement of the render is really bad. The font and the placement of the text is really bad. Here's some tips that can make your gfx way better. First, find better quality fonts and background. Maybe like planetrenders. Second, try to blend your render with the background. You can smuge it but find the background that fits the render. Third, Try not putting any text of any of your gfx before you master good placement with your rendering, blending, and much more. Finding the right font and the right placement of the text is pretty hard so don't do that for the time being. Read some tuts and watch some youtube video! You'll get better!
    Thanks man! I know I have a lot to improve on, this is only my second day doing it :P . Is there any good blending tutorials you know of?

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    Google beginner signature tutorials -> click images -> follow one of the tuts
    Can't really give any cnc on these tags because their is much I can say other than it's lacking a lot of the basics and fundamentals of sigs/tags

    Look at the tut get a feel for basic composition and flow and your tags will show a great improvement

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    AY @easton816 Yea you are lacking depth, flow and stuff.
    Please like I said, STAY AWAY from text lmao.
    I advise you hahaha, I've ruined many tags w/ text.
    Like I said go on DA and just work on signature tutorials found there

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    Quote Originally Posted by Organized Chaos View Post
    AY @easton816 Yea you are lacking depth, flow and stuff.
    Please like I said, STAY AWAY from text lmao.
    I advise you hahaha, I've ruined many tags w/ text.
    Like I said go on DA and just work on signature tutorials found there
    yeah I gotchu.. text, depth and blending.... those are my goals

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    Quote Originally Posted by easton816 View Post
    yeah I gotchu.. text, depth and blending.... those are my goals
    You totally left out a huge item there.
    FLOW

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    Quote Originally Posted by Organized Chaos View Post


    You totally left out a huge item there.
    FLOW

    Oh yes that too, I a researching my fair share. Also any advice on how to make a logo?

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    Quote Originally Posted by easton816 View Post
    Oh yes that too, I a researching my fair share. Also any advice on how to make a logo?
    No...
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    You can't just go out and make shit...
    Learn how to do a decent signature first omg...
    Just talk to me on skype rofl

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    You don't have to learn how to do a signature before doing a logo.. some people do amazing logos and make shit signatures.. it doesn't matter.. don't give bad advice.


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    yeah honestly if u wanna make logos go for it
    its different types of art so you dont need to do one before the other
    Organized Chaos has no idea what hes talking about

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    Quote Originally Posted by MC² View Post
    yeah honestly if u wanna make logos go for it
    its different types of art so you dont need to do one before the other
    Organized Chaos has no idea what hes talking about
    Thanks dude! The only reason I'm asking is my friend is getting in the music mixes business, and he needs a logo so I wanted to help .

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mr.Seyeko View Post
    You don't have to learn how to do a signature before doing a logo.. some people do amazing logos and make shit signatures.. it doesn't matter.. don't give bad advice.
    Quote Originally Posted by MC² View Post
    yeah honestly if u wanna make logos go for it
    its different types of art so you dont need to do one before the other
    Organized Chaos has no idea what hes talking about
    Yea totz, says the one who just got into gfx like idk 2 weeks ago and then stopped?

    Oh and too both of you.
    He just started like 3 days ago.
    He doesn't even have fundamentals learned

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